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Fic post from my archive.

Relay

After the third-years graduate, how do those who remain adjust? Drama, I-2

Momo didn't mind that Ryouma was quiet and obnoxious, and Ryouma didn't mind that Momo was loud and obnoxious. They met in the middle, and it all worked out.

Date: 2004-08-10 12:28 am (UTC)
ext_1114: (evil)
From: [identity profile] written-in-blue.livejournal.com
[solemn]

God help the Seigaku players under the regime of Echizen-buchou.

Ryouma: [glare] I heard that.

You were meant to, Ochibi.

What bet, precisely, did Fuji and Inui have going, anyway? [curious]

Date: 2004-08-10 01:04 am (UTC)
ext_1114: (come and get me)
From: [identity profile] written-in-blue.livejournal.com
And Kaidoh doesn't need these extracurricular training sessions because he's in communication (cough) with Inui, perhaps?

Fuji probably ought to know better than to bet with Inui.

Date: 2004-08-10 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] anruik
I feel for them both. Paperwork is always a hassle when you just want to get out there and deal with the people rather than the papers. Even if the papers are less likely to strike back, at least the people are more interesting, na?

Date: 2004-08-10 03:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] naanima.livejournal.com
Echizen-buchou.

You know, logically I know Ryouma -will- be the captain after Momo (he'll definitely bet he next captain, he has the skills), but the thought of Ochibi doing the job put the fear of god in me (or the other regulars). Yes it does.

However, having said that, it is also extremely clear that Ryouma would make an excellect captain. If he lack skills in communication he makes up for it in his ability to see weaknesses and strengths in a person under 5 sec flat, and he'll always make you know if you're doing a good job or not. In his own way.

Anyways, adore this fic, absolutely adored, Ryouma and Momo's interaction was just perfect, but I have to say Inui and Fuji's brief appearance and Ryouma's urge to hide made me laugh -very- hard. Love. I'm -very- interested in this arc.

Date: 2004-08-10 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] naanima.livejournal.com
And someone who can understand Ryouma-Speak. 'cos you know sometime it's hard to distinguish between the Smirk that says 'I know your secret. And I'm going to use it to grind your face into the ground,' and the Smirk that says 'Not bad.'

Hmm, you know Ryouma is like Tezuka when it comes to communications, except where Tezuka is more of a whole body-language thing, Ryouma is more of a Smirk-speak.

Kachirou and Oishii would have been so rich if they had written 'How to understand your Buchou'

Hmm. I think the drugs are kicking in ^__^

Date: 2004-08-11 08:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flamesword.livejournal.com
lmao! had to comment....yeah, it's definitely smirk-speak. XD God I love him.

Kachirou and Oishii would have been so rich if they had written 'How to understand your Buchou'

*dies laughing* oh yes, yes indeed!

Date: 2004-08-10 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mllelaurel.livejournal.com
Fi~nally! *cuddles* You can already see the first glimmers of the MomoRyo - just the way they interact, and how they genuinely ~like~ being around one another.

And I can't help but love the Hiyoshi-Kaidou parallel. It's so appropriate, but you wouldn't think of it, unless you looked closer. Oh, and I assume that we will get to find out, sooner or later, what the bet between Inui and Fuji was all about. ^.^

Looking forward to more! (Here's to hoping Ryoma-buchou doesn't drive his players into the nearest mental asylum) ^_^;

Date: 2004-08-11 01:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladycrysiana.livejournal.com
I've been reading your fic for a while, but I don't know that I've commented (I don't believe that I have.) I just wanted to say that I really enjoy your fic, especially the Mirror fics. (Admittedly, this is mostly because it gives me mental images of Yuuta being in control of Fuji and Mizuki and using his powers for evil good.) I'm happy that you're getting to the MomoRyo part, because...well, I wanna see Momo get pissed at Nanjiroh for how he's pushed Ryoma.

Date: 2004-08-11 08:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flamesword.livejournal.com
Now I have to go back and read all the other Mirror fics. ^^;; But I have a weakness for MomoRyo, so when it showed up on my friends page I had to read it. ^_^ Wonderful....so exactly the way I see them. I <3 you!

Date: 2004-08-12 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flamesword.livejournal.com
Well that's good, but I'll get around to reading the rest sooner or later...you're in elite company. You've been added to my short list of authors (only two so far in this fandom) that I will read whatever you write and like it, no matter what it is--even if the pairings make me want to run screaming. ^^;; (omg, Tezuka/Atobe? >< yeesh...)

Date: 2004-08-11 09:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
love you; love your fic---very relieved that it won't clash with "Friends & Lovers", and will reply more next week when I actually have *time* ('time'? what's that?)

Date: 2004-08-11 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
You wouldn't have derailed me at all--never fear that. Maybe send me off on a few tangent stops, sure. ^____^ But F&L's starts in Momo's first year of HS and Ryoma's the agressor in that relationship so far (a true american go-getter anyone?), and I was cranky last night and excited to be reading more of your stuff (it really is crazy how excited I get to see a new story out by you).

Okay.... now I gotta book it cause the parentals wanna use the phone. Darn it! I *knew* there was another reason I disliked 56K's so much...

Date: 2004-08-11 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aishuu.livejournal.com
Several thoughts cross my mind.

I've seen the "up the hill" scenario before, and while I understand it, I think I'd like to see the ties truly broken... Seigaku (unlike Rikkai) has few ties between divisions, and I think it would be more "meaningful" to move on completely. We witness Yamato, who is in the senior division, and his presence is like a God descending.

I do like the "full circle" nature of this, and Ryoma's willfulness. I think next year will be a sadder year...

I do pity Momoshiro. I don't think I'd like to be captain of a club with Echizen as the star. Tezuka receives massive recognition because of his skill, and while Momoshiro is GOOD, he's not LEGENDARY.

Date: 2004-08-13 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] risingtides.livejournal.com
I want to do that!!! ^_~ I think next year is going to be a sad year for Seigaku - but there's ways they can win. I'll be doing an RT post on it soon... I started it off with a vote, and strangely Kaidou and Momoshirou are about even with votes for who the next captain should be.

Arigatou is a fun song... <--- fangirls Okiayu-sama madly

You don't see Kaidou working on maintaining the ties? I think if Momoshiro breaks the boundary first, Kaidou would be right on his heels - there's no WAY Kaidou will get ahead of him.

Date: 2004-08-20 06:00 am (UTC)
ext_9905: (pray)
From: [identity profile] soloproject.livejournal.com
*loooves* I only get to comment now. Whoa.

I don't really like Ryoma but you've given me a better perspective here. And oh man, Momo-buchou! It's so hot and I totally agree, between him and Kai, it's definitely Momo who will be buchou. :D I think you've painted a great picture on what it would be like. I'm going to enjoy this MomoRyo thing mwahahaha!

Date: 2004-08-21 01:06 am (UTC)
ext_9905: (Default)
From: [identity profile] soloproject.livejournal.com
Actually, I think Kaidoh would make a really good captain...he unfortunately lacks the people skills. Unlike Tezuka who is still civil and reachable, people would probably just get scared off.

But that's just me. ^^ Momo is adorable. <3 Not only would he make a good captain but probably a good coach in the future. :D

Date: 2004-08-30 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] exwaiz.livejournal.com
Absolutely brilliant, I love this and I'm not even a fan of the pairing. That last bit really made me giggle, great job!

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