PoT: Mirror Writing: Wrapped Around My Finger

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Wrapped Around My Finger

Mizuki seduces Yuuta, and possibly vice versa. Drama With Romance, I-3

It wasn't that Yuuta didn't know what kind of person Mizuki Hajime was. He knew perfectly well.

Comments

[naanima.livejournal.com]

OMG!

Let's just state right now that I will continue to EGG you on! Yes, I will.

But this was, this was so twisty, yet so straightforward. Urk, I'm trying to put my thoughts into words, and all I can think about is the ending. Not the Mizuki putting his foot in it (though quite amusing, but Fuji baiting is never healthy), it is the realisation that Yuuta's life is good, and not fully controlled by the two because the two obsessive/possessive freaks keep each other in check.

It is the realisation that Yuuta, teh Fuji that he is, and the wonderful boy that he is, is manipulating everything in his favour. Not saying that he's involved with Mizuki only for the counterbalance to Fuji, but rather he's manipulating everyone WITHOUT lying to his own feelings.

And that, that my friend is admirable.

And Mizuki, oh gods Mizuki, the snake truly cares for Yuuta. No matter how that caring (dare I say love?) comes with ten pages of disclaimer and footnotes. Ulterior motives abound, yes, yet EVERYONE is truhtful to themselves without betraying each other. I LOVE!

I can't wait to see what you will be coming up with next.

And Yuuta writing to Fuji about Mizuki and him was just PRICELESS, yet so in character. I SQUEE!

[exwaiz.livejournal.com]

This certainly isn't how I perceive Mizuki, it's a very nice take on his personality. I think I prefer your Mizuki than the one that's in my mind. ^_^

I love how you characterize Yuuta, because he follows Mizuki's orders yet he's not afraid to defy him. And he deserves a medal for putting up with both his brother and Mizuki.

I really enjoyed reading this. <3

Oh and this: It was you from the very first, Yuuta-kun
makes me melt.

[soloproject.livejournal.com]

YAAAAAA!!! Cookies and love for you!

Mizuki is soo ebbil!!! Poor Yuuta. At the same time, yay for Yuuta!

[tsukinotenshi.livejournal.com]

This is... *_*

I'm speechless. You just made me LOVE Mizuki-kun more~Vv

I... need to do something about this.. *mumbles and walks out of the room*

[sudaki.livejournal.com]

I just wanted to say... not only is this WAY funnycute, but I love you to death for mentioning Bakazawa/Kaneda. (HEART HEART HEART) ^_^;;

[anbaachan.livejournal.com]

I really enjoyed the depth you gave to the characters here...and you based it all in anime canon, which makes it that much better. It's nice to see Mizuki portrayed as somthing more than just a bastard, and Yuuta as more than a victim--especially because I think Yuuta has wa-ay more strength of character than a lot of people give him credit for. You have made this Yummi fangirl veryvery happy ^^

[ayonoi.livejournal.com]

This fic was SO GOOD. I can not tell you how close I came to just shower my computer screen (at work, at lunch!) at some parts (the phone call, ohh Mizuki-kun is the evil!)and I laughed as poor Yuuta turned the color of turnips. I am so reading the next few...Yuuta, lucky boy you!

Alma

[magnolia-ceres.livejournal.com]

;________;

*resurrects from the dead* I'm so excited - I can't find any words to describe my glee... but Mizuki and Yuuta!!! ♥♥♥ Not only are fics for my yummi OTP generally rare to find, but yours was really enjoyable too >o<. Though I prefer YuutaMizuki over MizukiYuuta - what I love about them is that either would work, with Mizuki trying to manipulate Yuuta, but the latter being strong enough to follow his own way. Mizuki just can't escape from Yuuta's boyish charms, even though he claims to be in change himself... it's like opposites attract ^___^.

I love your Mizuki's reasons to desire Yuuta (and the whole yummi love in it!! <33) and Mizuki's line at the phone *giggles madly*... And I adore the conclusion, because it's something I've never thought about directly, but it makes perfect sense to me now X3~~ This triangle is just insolvable as it is, with Yuuta in the center! *wibbles with love*

(btw is this really...Fuji and Tachibana??? XDDD *crackles*)

[flamesword.livejournal.com]

Bloody fucking hell. Okay, you sold me. (not that there was going to be much doubt, but yeah....) wow. I told you I was avoiding this. I avoided it for a long time. But. wow. Even considering it's you, I am impressed. I might even...well, not like, but appreciate Mizuki by the time you are done with me. lol. Damn. That is Fuji Yuuta. You got him. Like crystal. Beautiful. *fangirls him* He's so awesome. And he can handle Mizuki, yes he can. *wants to write Yuuta fic now*

You know you rock, right? You're amazing. I hate this pairing. But I will read the rest, oh yes. Guh. Anybody who writes Yuuta like that can own my soul. But you already do. *amused* I like your An-chan too, though she only appears by mention, it's very her. So much love! ^________^ *sparkles*