PoT: Hearts and Spades: See and Raise

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

See and Raise

Mizuki comes to see Yuuta play; so does Fuji; a little silent competition ensues. Drama with Romance, I-3

He'd never really taught Yuuta anything about managing people; he'd never had to.

Comments

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmm. Yeah, Mizuki definitely won that round. *pets him*

I'll bet that Fuji has some interesting things he'd like to say to Yuuta just now.

[branchandroot]

*snickers* Yeah, I'm thinking the visit home will be underrun with the constant unspoken current of "you /didn't/..."

[pedotastic.livejournal.com]

The Mizuki in my head is very happy at the result of this fic. \o/

Although I'm a little bit worried about Yuuta and that visit home. ♥

Lovely bit of work as always. I adore the way you write these twoooo.

[branchandroot]

*grins* Thank you! My Mizuki is pretty darn happy with it too.

*laughing* I'm sure Yuuta will manage his visit in his usual fine form. Growling and snapping all the while. ^_^

[epigrammist.livejournal.com]

Mizuki for the win! Yes! ^o^ Mmm, it's so nice to read a fic where Fuji doesn't completely dominate Mizuki (that gets old after a while), and Yuuta was just so confident and adorable. ♥

Lovely, lovely writing, as always. This just gets better and better. ♥

[branchandroot]

*sparkles* Thank you!

*snerks* Yeah, I did the Fuji-dominating-Mizuki years back, which was fun to play with and add twists to, but I wanted Mizuki to win one hands down, this time, especially since it's about Yuuta. *dotes on her characters* They can be such adorable saps.

few minor errors

[iff-u-loved-me.livejournal.com]

um, it's forgotten not forgetten and suppress has 2 p's not 1- I know, the english language sucks

but yeah, this chapter was really cool - I love the interactions between Mizuki and Fuji, I'm sure there's a whole power play mind game thing going on that I'm not aware of..but alas, I'll leave that to the tensais, nya? Sometimes I'm not sure whether or not Yuuta's as oblivious as he appears to be about the tension but he's been dealing with both of them for such a long time...who knows? thanks again for getting another one out so soon- I'm addicted!

Re: few minor errors

[branchandroot]

Oh bugger; I thought I'd remembered to spellcheck this. Ah, well, thanks for telling me.

*grins* Yuuta probably isn't /quite/ as oblivious as he seems, but to him it's all so straightforward, I think he doesn't quite get the possessiveness competition the other two have going. *snerks*

Great to hear you liked it!

[cherrysnowflake.livejournal.com]

yeah! take that Fuji!! Mizuki: 1 Fuji: 0 ..sorry.. don't mind me.. i liked this chapter ^^

[branchandroot]

*laughing* Well, Mizuki needs to get his own back some time, right? Only fair.

Glad you liked it!

[uminohikari.livejournal.com]

I'm kind of really late in commenting... >>
stupid no internet rules..

but that was amazing
♥ for you

[branchandroot]

Comments are lovely whenever they come! Glad to hear you liked it. ^_^