PoT: Hearts and Spades: See and Raise

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

See and Raise

Mizuki comes to see Yuuta play; so does Fuji; a little silent competition ensues. Drama with Romance, I-3

He'd never really taught Yuuta anything about managing people; he'd never had to.

Comments

few minor errors

[iff-u-loved-me.livejournal.com]

um, it's forgotten not forgetten and suppress has 2 p's not 1- I know, the english language sucks

but yeah, this chapter was really cool - I love the interactions between Mizuki and Fuji, I'm sure there's a whole power play mind game thing going on that I'm not aware of..but alas, I'll leave that to the tensais, nya? Sometimes I'm not sure whether or not Yuuta's as oblivious as he appears to be about the tension but he's been dealing with both of them for such a long time...who knows? thanks again for getting another one out so soon- I'm addicted!

Re: few minor errors

[branchandroot]

Oh bugger; I thought I'd remembered to spellcheck this. Ah, well, thanks for telling me.

*grins* Yuuta probably isn't /quite/ as oblivious as he seems, but to him it's all so straightforward, I think he doesn't quite get the possessiveness competition the other two have going. *snerks*

Great to hear you liked it!