PoT: Hearts and Spades: See and Raise

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

See and Raise

Mizuki comes to see Yuuta play; so does Fuji; a little silent competition ensues. Drama with Romance, I-3

He'd never really taught Yuuta anything about managing people; he'd never had to.

Comments

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmm. Yeah, Mizuki definitely won that round. *pets him*

I'll bet that Fuji has some interesting things he'd like to say to Yuuta just now.

[pedotastic.livejournal.com]

The Mizuki in my head is very happy at the result of this fic. \o/

Although I'm a little bit worried about Yuuta and that visit home. ♥

Lovely bit of work as always. I adore the way you write these twoooo.

[epigrammist.livejournal.com]

Mizuki for the win! Yes! ^o^ Mmm, it's so nice to read a fic where Fuji doesn't completely dominate Mizuki (that gets old after a while), and Yuuta was just so confident and adorable. ♥

Lovely, lovely writing, as always. This just gets better and better. ♥

few minor errors

[iff-u-loved-me.livejournal.com]

um, it's forgotten not forgetten and suppress has 2 p's not 1- I know, the english language sucks

but yeah, this chapter was really cool - I love the interactions between Mizuki and Fuji, I'm sure there's a whole power play mind game thing going on that I'm not aware of..but alas, I'll leave that to the tensais, nya? Sometimes I'm not sure whether or not Yuuta's as oblivious as he appears to be about the tension but he's been dealing with both of them for such a long time...who knows? thanks again for getting another one out so soon- I'm addicted!

[cherrysnowflake.livejournal.com]

yeah! take that Fuji!! Mizuki: 1 Fuji: 0 ..sorry.. don't mind me.. i liked this chapter ^^

[uminohikari.livejournal.com]

I'm kind of really late in commenting... >>
stupid no internet rules..

but that was amazing
♥ for you