ES21: Standalone: Personal Weapons

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Personal Weapons

Hiruma and Mamori play with guns. Romance, I-2

The telling point, she felt, was that, however enticing the idea of things that went bang and whoosh and crackle were, she didn't really want to shoot Hiruma himself. If she were being corrupted by his wild, thoughtless attitude she would, wouldn't she? No one annoyed her as much as he did, after all.

Comments

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

*sparkles*

*sparkles some more*

*sparkles a whole lot more, actually*

Oh yum. Yum, yum, yum.

[branchandroot]

*hearts* I will forever love the scene with the flamethrower. Not to mention the SAM actually being canonical. Hiruma is wonderful and crazy, and Mamori is /totally/ being corrupted. *snerks*

[reya-smiles.livejournal.com]

Ooooh! That was, well, rather sexy in a way. Especially the ending. Great Job!!!

[branchandroot]

Thank you! I'm totally convinced that Mamori secretly likes guns.

[zelha.livejournal.com]

RAWR!!!

After that shooting practice, they did it down and dirty.

*0*

[branchandroot]

*snerks* I would not be at all surprised. ^_^ Glad you liked it!

[ningen-demonai.livejournal.com]

♥!

Sogoooood~

[branchandroot]

*sparkles* Thank you!

[love]

VERY nice. ^_^

[branchandroot]

*grins* Thank you!

[nikki-mischief.livejournal.com]

Yep. Hiruma would find a girl with a gun sexy. *nods firmly*

[branchandroot]

*laughing* He completely would. Glad you liked it!

Personal Weaps

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

uh huh. yep. They've so got to be hooking up. >.< And weaponry -- not to mention Sena -- is just fitting to do the job. I like how you captured her perfectionist attitude with the missed shot closely followed by a second attempt without prodding. Where you left though... such a tease! ~_~;;

Re: Personal Weaps

[branchandroot]

*giggling* I know, I know. But these two are hard to get explicit smut out of. Hiruma keeps shooting at me when I try to peek, you know.

Thank you!

[rhythmia.livejournal.com]

awesome-sauce. Pure awesome. Mamori feels spot on to me, with her fiery temper underneath the goody-goody exterior, and her perfectionist streak (hee the shooting lesson). Hiruma too (ahaha the flamethrower incident). The ending totally hit the spot. Will be looking for more of your fic! ^_^ *memories*

[branchandroot]

Thank you! I've always thought Mamori was way too stroppy to stay nice for too long. *grinning* Hiruma is just what she needs to bring it out.

[kiyoshi-chan.livejournal.com]

I'm always happy to see good Hiruma/Mamori (or good Hiruma, Mamori, actually. I'm not ALWAYS about the pairing. ;P) fanfic around, so I just have to sit here and give you starry-eyed looks. *_______*

[branchandroot]

*blushing* Thank you! I have to say, I really love the dynamics between these two, romantic or not. They just ring together so well.

[denkichan.livejournal.com]

Aaaw, this is my first foray into ES21 fandom and I'm glad it was this fic~
I like the way Mamori thought using Hiruma's methods to get people to do stuff was tempting. Still a member of the disciplinary committee at heart, I guess X3
Nice job - this was hot in a cute way <3

[branchandroot]

Thank you! Glad I could provide a nice introductory experience. ^_^

my mind is now in the gutter...

[akane2040.livejournal.com]

Foreplay comes in many shapes and sizes...

*blush*

Thanks for sharing! I love them as a couple...

*waddling off to hide from the gunfire*

Re: my mind is now in the gutter...

[branchandroot]

*very pleased* Indeed it does! It's great to hear you liked it. ^_^

[norrowa.livejournal.com]

Oh, that one made me grin at the end. ... yeah, is it weird that the word I immediately thought of was "cute"? In any case, that was just delightfully in character, and -- I really love the... hm, matter-of-fact sort of writing style? It makes it seem very realistic, and additionally the straightforwardness of it is incredibly Mamori.

The ending was just brilliant, too xD

[branchandroot]

*sparkles* Thank you! Mamori's voice is sometimes hard for me to keep a grip on, so it's great to hear that it's working out. Especially since these two tend to do their relationship stuff in really oblique ways. *wry*

[dragonsquee.livejournal.com]

♥♥♥ thank you so much for writing good (really good!) Hirumamo. The ES21 fandom is sadly lacking. Love how Hiruma brings out this new side of her.

[branchandroot]

Thank you so much! I have to say, I really love these two, and the dynamics between them.

[bluwoobelle.livejournal.com]

Wow! I loved this! I love shooting so this was especially great for me. It took me a few times to realize that I shoot left handed... The rush is amazing and I really think you got the feel of it down. Wonderful piece, you wrote them beautifully. Wow, I really can't describe just how much I enjoyed reading this. Thanks,
-Kelly

[branchandroot]

Thank you! That's really great to hear, especially since the only thing I've ever shot myself is a recurve bow. *grins* Good to know the feel of it came through right!

[hellosugah.livejournal.com]

Nice! Seems like Mamori to want to learn new things :)

[branchandroot]

*grins* Indeed, I think she does. Glad you liked it!