ES21: Standalone: Personal Weapons

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Personal Weapons

Hiruma and Mamori play with guns. Romance, I-2

The telling point, she felt, was that, however enticing the idea of things that went bang and whoosh and crackle were, she didn't really want to shoot Hiruma himself. If she were being corrupted by his wild, thoughtless attitude she would, wouldn't she? No one annoyed her as much as he did, after all.

Comments

[norrowa.livejournal.com]

Oh, that one made me grin at the end. ... yeah, is it weird that the word I immediately thought of was "cute"? In any case, that was just delightfully in character, and -- I really love the... hm, matter-of-fact sort of writing style? It makes it seem very realistic, and additionally the straightforwardness of it is incredibly Mamori.

The ending was just brilliant, too xD

[branchandroot]

*sparkles* Thank you! Mamori's voice is sometimes hard for me to keep a grip on, so it's great to hear that it's working out. Especially since these two tend to do their relationship stuff in really oblique ways. *wry*