ES21: Standalone: Personal Weapons

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Personal Weapons

Hiruma and Mamori play with guns. Romance, I-2

The telling point, she felt, was that, however enticing the idea of things that went bang and whoosh and crackle were, she didn't really want to shoot Hiruma himself. If she were being corrupted by his wild, thoughtless attitude she would, wouldn't she? No one annoyed her as much as he did, after all.

Comments

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

*sparkles*

*sparkles some more*

*sparkles a whole lot more, actually*

Oh yum. Yum, yum, yum.

[reya-smiles.livejournal.com]

Ooooh! That was, well, rather sexy in a way. Especially the ending. Great Job!!!

[zelha.livejournal.com]

RAWR!!!

After that shooting practice, they did it down and dirty.

*0*

[ningen-demonai.livejournal.com]

♥!

Sogoooood~

[love]

VERY nice. ^_^

[nikki-mischief.livejournal.com]

Yep. Hiruma would find a girl with a gun sexy. *nods firmly*

Personal Weaps

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

uh huh. yep. They've so got to be hooking up. >.< And weaponry -- not to mention Sena -- is just fitting to do the job. I like how you captured her perfectionist attitude with the missed shot closely followed by a second attempt without prodding. Where you left though... such a tease! ~_~;;

[rhythmia.livejournal.com]

awesome-sauce. Pure awesome. Mamori feels spot on to me, with her fiery temper underneath the goody-goody exterior, and her perfectionist streak (hee the shooting lesson). Hiruma too (ahaha the flamethrower incident). The ending totally hit the spot. Will be looking for more of your fic! ^_^ *memories*

[kiyoshi-chan.livejournal.com]

I'm always happy to see good Hiruma/Mamori (or good Hiruma, Mamori, actually. I'm not ALWAYS about the pairing. ;P) fanfic around, so I just have to sit here and give you starry-eyed looks. *_______*

[denkichan.livejournal.com]

Aaaw, this is my first foray into ES21 fandom and I'm glad it was this fic~
I like the way Mamori thought using Hiruma's methods to get people to do stuff was tempting. Still a member of the disciplinary committee at heart, I guess X3
Nice job - this was hot in a cute way <3

my mind is now in the gutter...

[akane2040.livejournal.com]

Foreplay comes in many shapes and sizes...

*blush*

Thanks for sharing! I love them as a couple...

*waddling off to hide from the gunfire*

[norrowa.livejournal.com]

Oh, that one made me grin at the end. ... yeah, is it weird that the word I immediately thought of was "cute"? In any case, that was just delightfully in character, and -- I really love the... hm, matter-of-fact sort of writing style? It makes it seem very realistic, and additionally the straightforwardness of it is incredibly Mamori.

The ending was just brilliant, too xD

[dragonsquee.livejournal.com]

♥♥♥ thank you so much for writing good (really good!) Hirumamo. The ES21 fandom is sadly lacking. Love how Hiruma brings out this new side of her.

[bluwoobelle.livejournal.com]

Wow! I loved this! I love shooting so this was especially great for me. It took me a few times to realize that I shoot left handed... The rush is amazing and I really think you got the feel of it down. Wonderful piece, you wrote them beautifully. Wow, I really can't describe just how much I enjoyed reading this. Thanks,
-Kelly

[hellosugah.livejournal.com]

Nice! Seems like Mamori to want to learn new things :)