PoT: Standalone: Verbalize

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Verbalize

In which Momoshiro is inexplicably exhbitionist. Also featuring Atobe Keigo, Sex God. Genre: Smut Recollected in Tranquility. Pairing: Yes, lots. Rating: I-4. Continuity: Not particularly

Momo's mouth curled up. It was always kind of fun when he could get people to play this game, especially someone who didn't like backing down. He'd given the viper a nosebleed, once, that way.

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[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

[coughs]

Momo gets around. Iesu Christi.

[purrs for the tastiness]

[branchandroot]

*snickers* Doesn't he, though? Well, there's your smut, my sweet, glad you liked it.

[anruik]

*just snickering quietly at the image of Amane trying to leave and hide his hard-on at the same time* That's bloody fantastic~

[branchandroot]

*sweeping bow* Thank you. *giggles* This was a trip to write. Atobe-muse is still looking smug, though I think Amane-muse is still trying to decide whether he broke even on the deal or not.

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

and the brain cells say, "wtf, mate!?!"

{grinning} that was actually a lot of fun... a brain-fryer, sure, but a *fun* one! ^___^

Tezuka and Momoshiro? o.o!
ATOBE and Momoshiro? O.O!!
Bane, David AND Momoshiro? !.!

I was just waiting for it to turn into Bane, David, and Atobe...

Oh, and the Fuji-Saeki moment! yeah! {cheers}

[branchandroot]

Fun frying is a good thing. ^_^V

I was just waiting for it to turn into Bane, David, and Atobe...

They tried, but that was where I put my foot down and wrote The End, lest it never stop. Or, worse, expand to include the whole flipping cast!

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

{snickers}
what? Not up for a little tenipuri-all-cast-orgy?
{laughs} as long as it's not me doing the writing. ^___^

I'll admitt--I was worried earlier when you mentioned something that would twist the fandom's panties... but this was quite enjoyable. ^___^

[branchandroot]

*snickers* I'm just waiting for the first howl over cutting off the immediate-perspective view of the threesome. This was a little experimental, in terms of showing all the smut in narrative after the fact. Which let me stuff in more pairings, but it does, of neccessity, make things less immediate. It was fun to play with, though.

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

Oh. Hmm... I don't know. It seemed to fit without a problem.....

{grins} and? has anyone howled yet about the 'cut-off' sex scene?

[branchandroot]

Not yet. ^_^ Apparently, Momo and I make good enough storytellers to appease everyone.

[hikariblue.livejournal.com]

I'm still trying to wrap my brain around Atobe/Momo. (... Not that I blame Momo at all, of course.) It's ... pretty cracked. No less hot, of course, but awfully strange.

[branchandroot]

*giggles* Well, if anyone could bowl Momo over...

Actually, it all stemmed from their very first meeting, and that 'doubles' match. It's never really mentioned again, since Atobe is so obsessed with Tezuka, but he is impressed with Momo, there. It always catches my attention, when I re-watch or read. I didn't really intend to do anything with it, here, but Atobe snuck up on me. ^_^;

That's the glory of crack, though, and hotness was the basic goal. ^_^V

[muscatlove.livejournal.com]

Momo is ebil. <3 If Amane was my roommate, I would be tempted too, lol. But damn, you know how to make smut like this work, and work well. ^^ Very nice, and bonus points for making these four characters go together so well.

[branchandroot]

*grins* Utterly ebil. The dear boy. Glad you liked it!

[ladycrysiana.livejournal.com]

This is great crackfic. Though it occurs to me that TeniPuri is one of the few fandoms in which you can actually cross the series with something like Petshop of Horrors and still validly claim that the fic is not cracked out, given the series. I'd be willing to bet that Keigo is quite happy at the title you gave him, too.

[branchandroot]

I doubt I will ever attain the crack-level that the anime writers reach so effortlessly. *hand over heart* But this was fun, as first attempts go. *giggles*

And, yeah, Keigo is still smirking and preening.

[naanima.livejournal.com]

OMFG! *squeals* I'm not online for awhile and when I finally return I'm greeted by good SMUT! OMFG! Momo! You OverlySmexed Peach! Atobe is just -perfect-, and Amane and Kurobane double teamng Momo is uh, guh. Me have major soft spot for Atobe/Momo (and threesomes). And let's NOT forget Tezuka and his tongue *giggles*

*worships*

[branchandroot]

*laughing* Yeah, Momo came out thoroughly oversexed for this one! I think Echizen's right, and he's been learning bad habits from Atobe. *grins* But that's cool, because it meant I finally got around to three smut-ideas that have been bugging me forever. And it's always good to know other people like my twisted imagination. ^_^

*snugs*

[mildlyinsane.livejournal.com]

*starry-eyed*

*sparkles at you*

YOU WROTE IT~! <3 <3 <3 <3

*totally adores*

momoshiro is a bit of a blabber-mouth, isn't he ? *grins* never mind how many laps tezuka is going to give momo for being late, how about laps for smexing kissing and telling? XDDD

(just read what i just wrote, and mental image of tezuka and licking and teeth popped in. dear emily. XDDDD

[mildlyinsane.livejournal.com]

oh, and email me your address please? will be heading down to the post office sometime this week! ^______^

email onlymildlyinsane @ yahoo.com

[branchandroot]

On the way!

[branchandroot]

*snuggles you* Thank you for encouraging me, my dear!

Laps for telling? *laughs* Hm, a hundred at least, and that only after Atobe has talked him down a little.

...or, maybe, Atobe could convince Tezuka that something more imaginative is appropriate. *leers*

Always glad to contribute good mental imagery. *tips hat*

[mildlyinsane.livejournal.com]

...or, maybe, Atobe could convince Tezuka that something more imaginative is appropriate. *leers*

GLEE~!

*feeds your bunnies encourages you further* ^___________________^

[featherypony.livejournal.com]

I just about died when it became apparent there would be a threesome. Especially between THOSE three! Not to mention TezukaxMomo and ATOBExMomo of all things, but the way you described it made it work. *nods* But it's all so hot. And I loved Momo's um...descriptions, in the bath and later to Atobe. *_* Hotness.

[branchandroot]

*sparkles* Good to hear it was hot, even at one remove! Momo and I had fun imagining things for him to describe. ^_-

[issen4.livejournal.com]

And Atobe, Sex God, wins.

Wow, this is hot. And Atobe/Momo works.

[branchandroot]

*grins* Thank you. I do like the dynamic between Atobe and Momo--they keep each other in line. Kind of.

[goddessneptune.livejournal.com]

*purrs* First off not enough DabideBane exists in this fine Tenipuri world!

Secondly, maybe Momo should adopt the term "lucky" from Sengoku (although Lucky Momo-chan-sempai would get a bit too long). I mean that boy gets around in a hot sort of way!

Something I definately enjoyed.

[branchandroot]

*grins* Glad to hear you liked it! It was a fun chance for me to play with some characters I like.

[solaas.livejournal.com]

*curls up snickering* About time someone out-played Momoshiro! And much love for the crack pairings; it's so nice of the PoTverse to have these training camps and seminars readily at hand, making such encounters easily staged. ~<3

In closing, ^_____________________________^

[branchandroot]

*giggling* Momo and I had fun with this story. The second time I have made unashamed use of the training-camp setting for no purpose other than smut.

And my first try at crack, too. Which probably set me up for my current insane project, may the muses have mercy on me.

Atobe: Mercy? What is this thing you speak of?

[morau.livejournal.com]

I wonder if it's strange, but it doesn't seem all that cracked to me? LOL. And the descriptions were delightfully smutty. YAY. Hotness.

[branchandroot]

*rueful* The anime definitely took off into the crack-o-sphere, and I think Konomi followed their example, so by comparison, now, this is pretty tame! *laughing* Great to hear you liked it!