PoT: Standalone: Verbalize

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Verbalize

In which Momoshiro is inexplicably exhbitionist. Also featuring Atobe Keigo, Sex God. Genre: Smut Recollected in Tranquility. Pairing: Yes, lots. Rating: I-4. Continuity: Not particularly

Momo's mouth curled up. It was always kind of fun when he could get people to play this game, especially someone who didn't like backing down. He'd given the viper a nosebleed, once, that way.

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[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

[coughs]

Momo gets around. Iesu Christi.

[purrs for the tastiness]

[anruik]

*just snickering quietly at the image of Amane trying to leave and hide his hard-on at the same time* That's bloody fantastic~

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

and the brain cells say, "wtf, mate!?!"

{grinning} that was actually a lot of fun... a brain-fryer, sure, but a *fun* one! ^___^

Tezuka and Momoshiro? o.o!
ATOBE and Momoshiro? O.O!!
Bane, David AND Momoshiro? !.!

I was just waiting for it to turn into Bane, David, and Atobe...

Oh, and the Fuji-Saeki moment! yeah! {cheers}

[hikariblue.livejournal.com]

I'm still trying to wrap my brain around Atobe/Momo. (... Not that I blame Momo at all, of course.) It's ... pretty cracked. No less hot, of course, but awfully strange.

[muscatlove.livejournal.com]

Momo is ebil. <3 If Amane was my roommate, I would be tempted too, lol. But damn, you know how to make smut like this work, and work well. ^^ Very nice, and bonus points for making these four characters go together so well.

[ladycrysiana.livejournal.com]

This is great crackfic. Though it occurs to me that TeniPuri is one of the few fandoms in which you can actually cross the series with something like Petshop of Horrors and still validly claim that the fic is not cracked out, given the series. I'd be willing to bet that Keigo is quite happy at the title you gave him, too.

[naanima.livejournal.com]

OMFG! *squeals* I'm not online for awhile and when I finally return I'm greeted by good SMUT! OMFG! Momo! You OverlySmexed Peach! Atobe is just -perfect-, and Amane and Kurobane double teamng Momo is uh, guh. Me have major soft spot for Atobe/Momo (and threesomes). And let's NOT forget Tezuka and his tongue *giggles*

*worships*

[mildlyinsane.livejournal.com]

*starry-eyed*

*sparkles at you*

YOU WROTE IT~! <3 <3 <3 <3

*totally adores*

momoshiro is a bit of a blabber-mouth, isn't he ? *grins* never mind how many laps tezuka is going to give momo for being late, how about laps for smexing kissing and telling? XDDD

(just read what i just wrote, and mental image of tezuka and licking and teeth popped in. dear emily. XDDDD

[featherypony.livejournal.com]

I just about died when it became apparent there would be a threesome. Especially between THOSE three! Not to mention TezukaxMomo and ATOBExMomo of all things, but the way you described it made it work. *nods* But it's all so hot. And I loved Momo's um...descriptions, in the bath and later to Atobe. *_* Hotness.

[issen4.livejournal.com]

And Atobe, Sex God, wins.

Wow, this is hot. And Atobe/Momo works.

[goddessneptune.livejournal.com]

*purrs* First off not enough DabideBane exists in this fine Tenipuri world!

Secondly, maybe Momo should adopt the term "lucky" from Sengoku (although Lucky Momo-chan-sempai would get a bit too long). I mean that boy gets around in a hot sort of way!

Something I definately enjoyed.

[solaas.livejournal.com]

*curls up snickering* About time someone out-played Momoshiro! And much love for the crack pairings; it's so nice of the PoTverse to have these training camps and seminars readily at hand, making such encounters easily staged. ~<3

In closing, ^_____________________________^

[morau.livejournal.com]

I wonder if it's strange, but it doesn't seem all that cracked to me? LOL. And the descriptions were delightfully smutty. YAY. Hotness.