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Fic post from my archive.

Verbalize

In which Momoshiro is inexplicably exhbitionist. Also featuring Atobe Keigo, Sex God. Genre: Smut Recollected in Tranquility. Pairing: Yes, lots. Rating: I-4. Continuity: Not particularly

Momo's mouth curled up. It was always kind of fun when he could get people to play this game, especially someone who didn't like backing down. He'd given the viper a nosebleed, once, that way.

Date: 2005-01-03 04:24 am (UTC)
ext_1114: (smut)
From: [identity profile] written-in-blue.livejournal.com
[coughs]

Momo gets around. Iesu Christi.

[purrs for the tastiness]

Date: 2005-01-03 04:57 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] anruik
*just snickering quietly at the image of Amane trying to leave and hide his hard-on at the same time* That's bloody fantastic~

Date: 2005-01-03 05:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
and the brain cells say, "wtf, mate!?!"

{grinning} that was actually a lot of fun... a brain-fryer, sure, but a *fun* one! ^___^

Tezuka and Momoshiro? o.o!
ATOBE and Momoshiro? O.O!!
Bane, David AND Momoshiro? !.!

I was just waiting for it to turn into Bane, David, and Atobe...

Oh, and the Fuji-Saeki moment! yeah! {cheers}

Date: 2005-01-03 06:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
{snickers}
what? Not up for a little tenipuri-all-cast-orgy?
{laughs} as long as it's not me doing the writing. ^___^

I'll admitt--I was worried earlier when you mentioned something that would twist the fandom's panties... but this was quite enjoyable. ^___^

Date: 2005-01-04 05:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
Oh. Hmm... I don't know. It seemed to fit without a problem.....

{grins} and? has anyone howled yet about the 'cut-off' sex scene?

Date: 2005-01-03 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hikariblue.livejournal.com
I'm still trying to wrap my brain around Atobe/Momo. (... Not that I blame Momo at all, of course.) It's ... pretty cracked. No less hot, of course, but awfully strange.

Date: 2005-01-03 08:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muscatlove.livejournal.com
Momo is ebil. <3 If Amane was my roommate, I would be tempted too, lol. But damn, you know how to make smut like this work, and work well. ^^ Very nice, and bonus points for making these four characters go together so well.

Date: 2005-01-03 10:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladycrysiana.livejournal.com
This is great crackfic. Though it occurs to me that TeniPuri is one of the few fandoms in which you can actually cross the series with something like Petshop of Horrors and still validly claim that the fic is not cracked out, given the series. I'd be willing to bet that Keigo is quite happy at the title you gave him, too.

Date: 2005-01-03 11:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] naanima.livejournal.com
OMFG! *squeals* I'm not online for awhile and when I finally return I'm greeted by good SMUT! OMFG! Momo! You OverlySmexed Peach! Atobe is just -perfect-, and Amane and Kurobane double teamng Momo is uh, guh. Me have major soft spot for Atobe/Momo (and threesomes). And let's NOT forget Tezuka and his tongue *giggles*

*worships*

Date: 2005-01-03 02:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mildlyinsane.livejournal.com
*starry-eyed*

*sparkles at you*

YOU WROTE IT~! <3 <3 <3 <3

*totally adores*

momoshiro is a bit of a blabber-mouth, isn't he ? *grins* never mind how many laps tezuka is going to give momo for being late, how about laps for smexing kissing and telling? XDDD

(just read what i just wrote, and mental image of tezuka and licking and teeth popped in. dear emily. XDDDD

Date: 2005-01-03 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mildlyinsane.livejournal.com
oh, and email me your address please? will be heading down to the post office sometime this week! ^______^

email onlymildlyinsane @ yahoo.com

Date: 2005-01-04 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mildlyinsane.livejournal.com
...or, maybe, Atobe could convince Tezuka that something more imaginative is appropriate. *leers*

GLEE~!

*feeds your bunnies encourages you further* ^___________________^

Date: 2005-01-03 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] featherypony.livejournal.com
I just about died when it became apparent there would be a threesome. Especially between THOSE three! Not to mention TezukaxMomo and ATOBExMomo of all things, but the way you described it made it work. *nods* But it's all so hot. And I loved Momo's um...descriptions, in the bath and later to Atobe. *_* Hotness.

Date: 2005-01-04 01:23 am (UTC)
ext_9800: (Default)
From: [identity profile] issen4.livejournal.com
And Atobe, Sex God, wins.

Wow, this is hot. And Atobe/Momo works.

Date: 2005-01-07 03:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goddessneptune.livejournal.com
*purrs* First off not enough DabideBane exists in this fine Tenipuri world!

Secondly, maybe Momo should adopt the term "lucky" from Sengoku (although Lucky Momo-chan-sempai would get a bit too long). I mean that boy gets around in a hot sort of way!

Something I definately enjoyed.

Date: 2005-01-30 12:10 pm (UTC)
ext_7549: (YODELIIIII)
From: [identity profile] solaas.livejournal.com
*curls up snickering* About time someone out-played Momoshiro! And much love for the crack pairings; it's so nice of the PoTverse to have these training camps and seminars readily at hand, making such encounters easily staged. ~<3

In closing, ^_____________________________^

Date: 2007-06-12 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morau.livejournal.com
I wonder if it's strange, but it doesn't seem all that cracked to me? LOL. And the descriptions were delightfully smutty. YAY. Hotness.

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