PoT: Standalone: Fortune
Jul. 19th, 2004 02:03 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Fic post from my archive.
Atobe encounters Yukimura at the museum, they fall to chatting, and events take a rather sharp left turn.
Yukimura rested his chin on one hand, and lifted his brows. He was, Keigo decided, perfectly well aware of what Keigo wanted to ask and was going to sit there with that attentive expression and watch Keigo squirm while he tried to come up with a courteous way to do it.
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Date: 2004-09-19 07:18 am (UTC)Like everyone else said, the Sanada comments, especially their timing, were great, but... You know what my favorite line is? ^^ The bit about having a habit of prodding dangerous things, just to see how dangerous they are. <3 I have much heartage for that part. X3 So very like him.
And, beyond a doubt, Yukimura is a dangerous thing. Machiavelli is, I think, the perfect comparison. People sometimes forget, I think, that he's the captain of Rikkai. Dangerous by default, and twice as sneaky. So. much. love! ^____^
You did good, you did very good. and now I shall join the clamoring for a sequel, pleasepleaseplease? ^_^
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Date: 2004-09-19 03:38 pm (UTC)People sometimes forget, I think, that he's the captain of Rikkai. *huge nodding* I can buy that Yukimura is kind, and rules his team more by moral suasion than by force. I can't buy that he's wimpy or inneffectual or naive. *hearts Yukimura*
*squints at story* This one, I think, will probably continue as a stand-alone. It's never spawned a sequel-bunny, despite how much fun it was to write these two.