[Fic] Elemental

[branchandroot]

Cross-post from my archive.

Fandom/Arc: Prince of Tennis, Standalone
Characters/Pairings: Kirihara Akaya, Yukimura Seiichi, Yukimura/Kirihara
Summary: Kirihara's view of Yukimura. Written for the Porn Battle prompt: Yukimura/Kirihara, elemental.
Meta: Character Sketch with Porn, I-4
Wordcount: 272

When Seiichi-san made love to him it was pure and intense and wiped Akaya's mind clean of everything but the body over him, inside him, the hands spread against his back, the dip of Seiichi-san's dark head over him.

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Elemental

When Seiichi-san made love to him it was pure and intense and wiped Akaya’s mind clean of everything but the body over him, inside him, the hands spread against his back, the dip of Seiichi-san’s dark head over him.

And the heat.

It almost wasn’t even pleasure. It was sensation, the trembling of nerves screaming a pure signal of yes, the tingle in muscles stretched and flexed, the throb of his cock rubbing against Seiichi-san’s stomach with bright flashes of heat that burst up his spine until they were light behind his eyes.

It was Yukimura Seiichi.

And Akaya gave himself to it completely, gladly, opening his hands to let the rest of existence flutter away and closing them instead on the firm, long muscles of Seiichi-san’s arms, letting his body flex and buck, wild and abandoned, as Seiichi-san’s cock drove into him again and again, letting himself scream as the heat finally condensed and exploded through his whole body.

It was incredible, hot and brilliant and overwhelming. There was nothing else quite like it, and it wrung Akaya out like a rag every time, left him breathless and lax and a little dazed. But it was the next part he thought he might love the most.

Because Seiichi-san gathered him up, held him tight and shuddered against him, whispering Akaya’s name. And Seiichi-san didn’t let go, just slid back and close again, cradling Akaya against him and kissing him softly until Akaya was pliant and trembling in his arms, more undone by the tenderness than by all the wild sensation. This was what he clung to.

It was Seiichi-san.

 

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Comments

[annotated_em]

[wibbles]

[wants more scanlations]

I was vaguely disappointed by the mangaka's putting Aoi Kentarou up against Kaidoh--I really liked his match against Ryouma in the anime. ^^;;;;;; On the whole, though, I think I really do prefer the manga... it's tighter (although sorely lacking in chibis, so far...) and it feels like it's not all about Ryouma, all the time...

Meh.

[branchandroot]

*salutes* Ryoukai!

Erm. I think I have enough room to put the second folder up. I'll check, later today, and let you know.

I admit, I was both entertained and mildly annoyed by Manga-Kentarou. His personal means of upping the pressure (girls) were... different. Dude, and he's only supposed to be 12 or so, too.

Do you notice that, while the kids look like athletic young men half again their alleged ages, the adults tend to look comedic and gorilla-like? Or else totally distant and sketchy. The contrast is fascinating. It lets the boy-readers identify with the maturity of the their-age characters while still making that maturity distinct from that of the laughable adults.

[annotated_em]

I admit, I was both entertained and mildly annoyed by Manga-Kentarou. His personal means of upping the pressure (girls) were... different. Dude, and he's only supposed to be 12 or so, too.

Yeah... The anime, if I'm recalling this correctly, didn't have any sort of romantic/girl-interest overtones. The Kentarou-Ryouma match was purely about the joy of playing/competing/winning (more on Ryouma's part, I think, than Kentarou's). What I've read of the manga so far doesn't reflect that... which grieves me.

Do you notice that, while the kids look like athletic young men half again their alleged ages, the adults tend to look comedic and gorilla-like? Or else totally distant and sketchy. The contrast is fascinating. It lets the boy-readers identify with the maturity of the their-age characters while still making that maturity distinct from that of the laughable adults.

Now that you've pointed it out... [grin]

Mostly I was just thrilled with smoking!Nanjirou. I'm a sucker for 2-D men (and the occasional woman, although Faye Valentine is the only one I can think of off-hand) with cigarettes.