PoT: Third Watch: The Other Side
Feb. 28th, 2005 07:02 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Fic post from my archive.
Kirihara deals with a stressful practice and finally snaps. In a good way.
Akaya tried to unclench his teeth before he gave himself a headache. “Both of you be quiet,” he growled.
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Date: 2005-03-02 05:16 am (UTC)Your fics are bad, bad for my coherence. No, make that horrible. Absolutely horrible. And I love you, sooooo, so very muchly.
And onee-sama, does this mean fangirls get to vote on that?
*thinks* Does it have to be his team? I doubt anyone other than the Glorious Three in former Rikkai ever had to coax and guide other players the way Akaya has to now. Captainly examples definitely work along the lines of Tezuka and Tachibana, as does Mirror!Atobe. *rethinks* Okay, maybe not Atobe, but the other two. Another things is, can anyone from his own (former) team really provide rational feedback (re: "too close")? Because the only one I can think about is Jackal or maaaaybe Yagyuu.
Or, would he need someone who's completely not a captain figure? Either in his team or out of it?
Okay, enough pretense of intelligence. Back to squeeing now. Squee!
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Date: 2005-03-02 05:43 pm (UTC)You're quite coherent, and make me think of good story-things. Because I think it's going to have to be Jackal, and a matter of saying the right thing without neccessarily understanding what's going on in Akaya's head.
*looks upon story idea* It is good. Now, if I can just be coherent enough, myself, to write it.
Thanks, love!
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Date: 2005-03-02 09:30 pm (UTC)I'm beginning to think the lack of coherency is my usual state, actually. It's not really a bad state to be in, especially when I'm slightly to moderately drunk. ^^x