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branchandroot) wrote2004-10-10 01:12 pm
branchandroot) wrote2004-10-10 01:12 pm
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PoT: Challenge: Fly
Fic post from my archive.
Side-story to the Challenge arc. Fuji finally plays a serious match against Tezuka.
Shuusuke was terrified.
All right, perhaps that was a bit strong, but it had been a very long time since he'd felt this kind of tension. Even longer since he'd had butterflies in his stomach and shaking hands over a tennis match.
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...wow. TezuFuji smut is amazingly rare; well-written TezuFuji smut is even rarer. Tezuka seems particularly well-written:
"Fuji, an all out game takes everyone like this, to one degree or another. You should wait until you can be sure."
So gentlemanly and
dumbbuchou-esque, even while wrapped in Fuji's tentacles. Heh.(no subject)
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mmmmmbuchou. mmmmmmfuji. in the showers. and the last line, which is almost as yummy as the rest.
sankyuu!
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Thank you again.
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Also, Yuuta could stand to get a little sense knocked into him... but it goes a long way toward explaining why Fuji plays the way he does.
[snuggles] So lovely!
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The moment, when he saw the opening for the last shot, when the world crystallized into perfection and he couldn't possibly have stopped the stroke that smashed the ball home, felt like he was breathing sunlight, hot and beautiful and brilliant.
And of course, the all of the porn was as well. ;) Thanks for sharing!
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2nd Muse: shuddup. this is a Fuji-Tezuka fic.
1st Muse: no, but I distinctly remember, because I was just so upset when all of a sudden Tezuka and Oishi were doing things together that a good Tezuka and Oishi shouldn't do.
2nd Muse: What part of "Fuji-Tezuka fic" did you not understand?
1st Muse: But that would mean Tezuka's cheating on Oishi and--
2nd Muse: did you *not* see the author's note at the top that said this fic exists in a bubble? hmmm?
1st Muse: .... I might have....
Andrea: Will you both shut up! There's Tezuka-Fuji porn happening!
Muse 1 & 2: Tezuka Fuji porn? Ooooooooh....
Absolutely stunning, my dear.
Your explaination for Fuji's reluctance for playing seriously because of his brother definitely is a believable motivating factor; as with the sense of torn feelings he must be experiencing if his truly believes that to play a friend or cared-for member of his team seriously means he will lose that person... And Tezuka, who's always been demanding he play serious... I like how it connects so beautifully with Yukimura's revelation to Fuji that the top long for and search for those who can keep them company, push them further, and how that's what Tezuka has always wanted from Fuji. A partner who can push him higher, make him stretch to reach further. You truly have set Fuji up to be the strongest player in the tenipuri universe, with a little more work at cutting loose and *burning*. ^__^ To borrow Taka's phrase.
I liked the afterglow of the high from the game, still pumping dangerously in their systems, seeming to dare Fuji to continue the serious game he started in one court. And the net getting in the way was a wonderfully humourous moment of love.
But most of all, my water-fettish hentai self rains hearts upon your shower scene---and begs for a sequel. >.> Although she knows she shouldn't.
now I must rewatch the usagi to neko video to recapture the amusement that is 'raining hearts'.... {giggles}
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These infuriatingly sexy tennis boys...
I love how you're able to write Tezuka and Fuji together in such a natural way. And I like Fuji's bout of nerves. Quite different from the way I usually see him.
Re: These infuriatingly sexy tennis boys...
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It was half a statement and half a demand, and maybe a hint of a question.
I love the vagueness that is of Tezuka's words as well. Amazingly written smut, if I do say so myself XD
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*blink* although... what are you worried about? this is a lovely lovely tezufuji fic. i can't see anyone not liking this. well. exactly for a couple of rabid anti-tezufu people i know lalalala but really, they be the exceptions.
a wonderful piece. *snugs*
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Though, in all seriousness, this was really fantastic and I think has to be one of my favorites of yours already, if only just because the sex was the kind that... I was thinking about this for a bit and one of the things I really like in smutfic is when it's not just a visual that pops into my head, but I can also feel something. Like the warmth of the water or the rough texture of the washcloth across shoulders. Little things like that, when done right, are what can make a scene go from "solid" to "OMGHOT +__+".
Plus. Okay, sure. Fine. The intensity and layers to these characters that's just constantly there, rather than feeling like it's coming out of nowhere, that those things are always there, always lurking behind the unreadable expressions or closed eyes, I really adore that. <3<3<3
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Thanks for sharing this story. It was a wonderful way to wind down from a rough day at work!
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In the same time Fuji would surely begin to buy random dvds for Tezuka like basic instinct, fatal attraction and other michael douglas flicks with a card saying something about in real life, MD would probably died at the end of the story.
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I love the characterizations of Tezuka and Fuji - it fits that it would be like this between them. And the sexiness of the shower scene didn't hurt either.
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