PoT: Challenge: Credit
Jul. 8th, 2004 07:40 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Fic post from my archive.
This story takes place in a quantum bubble of the Challengeverse (maybe it happened, maybe it didn't), immediately following "The Continuation of War". Tezuka offers Oishi some support after his very bad day.
It had not been a relaxing day for Oishi Shuichirou.
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Date: 2004-07-09 12:25 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-09 01:20 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-09 12:38 am (UTC)Is there anything you write that won't turn me into Em-goo? No? I thought not.
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Date: 2004-07-09 01:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-09 01:29 am (UTC)Tezuka/Oishi porn.
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*fans self*
More?
*dump truck after truck of truffles*
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Date: 2004-07-09 02:08 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-09 02:38 am (UTC)But, darling, now I have to go write the Yanagi/Inui you wanted. *eyes Tezuka and Oishi* I have to say, though, they certainly made it easier for me than I was expecting. Such obliging boys. I may come back to them. *pets*
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Date: 2004-07-09 02:57 am (UTC)Oishi: [grimace] Damn my accomodating nature.
Yanagi/Inui! Squee! SQUEE!
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Date: 2004-07-09 03:02 am (UTC)Just the thought of Yanagi/Inui make me squee with happiness and joy.
(Of course they are obliging. They know their chances of failure very well. So they may as well sit back and enjoy the ride ^___^)
Love you darling *hugglesglomp*
*waits*
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Date: 2004-07-09 03:13 am (UTC)It really doesn't get better than this...except um...*cough* YanaInui and...*hack* ♥ I've missed this pair, really, I have. \(^o^)/
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Date: 2004-07-09 03:47 am (UTC)*snuggles*
Erm. You realize that if I write FujiKiri it's likely to be somewhat similar to the FujiMizu? Like, kinda, darksmut? I'm not sure I can do that to Kiri-elf.
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Date: 2004-07-09 06:06 am (UTC)Yes, darksmut. Exactly. Is there some kind of ummm...like a fluffy red-eyed black plot bunny amongst the fray?
But ok...I'll take read your FujiMizu stuff again and leave you alone on the *cough* FujiKiri. XD
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Date: 2004-07-09 03:16 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-09 03:49 am (UTC)*sighs*
*eyes AtoYuki bunny*
*bunny bounces cutely*
*holds out arms* If this actually goes anywhere, I shall be sure to blame you for it. ^_-
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Date: 2004-07-09 03:54 am (UTC)yay the AtoYuki bunny may have a new home :D!! thanks XD<3 you're awesome. oh I wholly blame myself too. XD I don't even know how I got on the topic of AtoYuki but once I got onto it, I started liking it and omg it just works so well with renaissance and art and kfdlajdk *brain breaks from the pretty overload*
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Date: 2004-07-09 04:50 am (UTC)Pardon, plotting out loud. *files after YukiKiri*
^_^
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Date: 2004-07-09 03:27 am (UTC)Omake... means... parody, ne?
Don't get me wrong... it was--is--a good story... but... but... {spurtters} It's OISHI! and TEZUKA! WTF!!! {wails and pulls at hair}
My brain... can't... compute....
Other than that minor user-problem...
Really did like way you described the relationship between captain and vice captain... and between these two friends. How they can support each other with Oishi's openness and Tezuka's seemingly unending strength...
(and then my brain fried when they started kissing >.< )
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Date: 2004-07-09 03:52 am (UTC)*bounces* Lookee, I fried her brain! Go me!
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Date: 2004-07-09 04:19 am (UTC){waves hand} I'll ask my boss at class tonight.
And it's not nice to fry your readers brains!!!! How I'm a supposed to WRITE when my brain is *fried*???? HUH????
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Date: 2004-07-09 04:41 am (UTC)I am taken with a sudden vision of this story taking place during the closing credits of Continuation, in chibi form.
*falls out of chair laughing*
OMG. Ok, excuse me, but I am inspired, and must go change the title, right now. Oh, it's perfect.
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Date: 2004-07-09 06:12 am (UTC){blinks}
{thinks}|
{re-reads}
@.@ Ooooooh...
{falls out of chair laughing}
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Date: 2004-07-09 06:23 am (UTC){blinks}
{thinks}|
{re-reads}
@.@ Ooooooh...
{falls out of chair laughing}
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Date: 2004-07-09 04:47 am (UTC)You've probably been in the fanbase long enough to have learned the term before the meaning really started to slip. It never fails to astonish me how fast it can happen, I mean, a matter of a year or two in online-based communities.
This does not stop me from railing against fate when it's an annoying shift. For instance, all the signs here in Ohio that say "Stop here to actuate signal." Yes, help that traffic light be all it can be! *facepalm*
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Date: 2004-07-09 06:28 am (UTC){pouting} glad I could help inspire... even if it's *still* an Oishi & Tezuka fic....
Hey! I thought there was supposed to be Fuji & Tezu action!!!!
Okay... gotta ask... "Stop here to actuate signal"??? Huh???
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Date: 2004-07-09 04:47 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-11 11:53 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-11 03:28 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-11 03:32 pm (UTC){wonders what *other* surprises are in store...}
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Date: 2004-07-09 05:52 am (UTC)Ex: Ever read some of the Gundam manga? Those little chibi comic strips at the end of the books? Like how to draw Trowa, or Heero using Duo's braid for a brush? That sort of thing? Those are omake.
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Date: 2004-07-09 06:33 am (UTC)(and yes, although it's been a while, I do remember the 'braid for a paint brush' incident' ^__^)
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Date: 2004-07-09 08:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-09 01:04 pm (UTC)I never could understang why people couldn't see how well they are together...
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Date: 2004-07-09 01:09 pm (UTC)but... but... This story had all the setting ups for a Fuji-Tez relationship... and my mind had fitted itself for that schema... and then...
WHAM!!! I literally... could not... compute... my brain actually stopped reading and understanding what was going on right after Tezuka kissed Oishi.
I swear... it's the weirdest thing... I don't think it's ever happened to me before.... >.< '''
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Date: 2004-07-09 01:47 pm (UTC)Sometimes I envy who can read all kind of pairs...I'm not like this. When I dislike something (like MomoRyo, for example...or Golden Pair) I can't force myself into it (with rare, rare exceptions).
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Date: 2004-07-11 11:37 am (UTC)Still, I'll admit to there not being enough good Tezu-Oishi fics out there.
See, in my mind, the characters naturally pair off--funnily enough, into all the Seigaku pairings you don't like. ^.^--but if the story is well written and the characterization done right, it's easy to see how any pairing might couple. It's the same with the boys being straight. I can see them all being hetero without stretching my mind to the limits, but if I'm going to read it in a story (even mine) I want it to be darn right believable.
You know what I'm saying?
We've got ourselves a great author here, though, so I'm sure now that I've given my mind a chance to adjust to the shock of it all, there won't be any problem.
In fact (after being *forced* {grins teasingly} to like Tez/Atobe), I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out... She has her work cut out for her, though, doesn't?
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Date: 2004-07-09 11:47 am (UTC)Ahem, to get back to the point. I love your Oishi. It's nice to know that he's not some super-patient, long-suffering Japanese boy who gets stamped with the 'mother' label. Well, not one who doesn't get any sex, anyway. Especially sex with Tezuka-with-personality.
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Date: 2004-07-09 04:50 pm (UTC)Poor Oishi, it almost makes me wonder what Konomi had against him to put that 'mother of Seigaku' line in his actual profile info. I mean, talk about a curse. He deserves good sex. *firm nod*
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Date: 2004-07-09 12:59 pm (UTC)I simple LOVE Tezuka and Oishi together. They are the best pair in my opinion. I love, love, love them. And it's so rare to find any fic with them together. Everybody always write Tezuka with Fuji and...well, that's not a pair that I like. And Tezuka/Oishi is a rarity and you as always were perfect. So, I love you even more now for doing it.
Thank you, thank you, thank you so much.
And I know I didn't do any sense in this comment, but...that's because I'm too happy to be real ^_^
*** PS: I'm definetly not used to listen Oishi being called Shuichirou...
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Date: 2004-07-09 04:55 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-12 11:48 am (UTC){laughing} you know... this reminds me of what Aishuu and I were talking about with Echizen and his maturity--or lack there of--and how his attitude towards respect is very much one of a more American upbringing.
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it had been the crack about Niou's own captain that had been the last straw
This is such a telling observation about Oishi's character. Where Yukimura would have laughed it off and/or played into Niou's teasing, Oishi took offense for him... or maybe I'm reading this wrong?
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sspp... I noticed this 'cause of someone else's comment, but, the third paragraph---"Oishi's teeth were grinding"...
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mmmm... Tezuka's hands... massage.... damn, I bet that feels good....
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I don't know... maybe I'm a liar, and I really can't read most pairings... but this.. still didn't sit right with me. Not so much with it being Tezuka and Oishi, but... but with it being Tezuka. Tezuka seemed off to me. I haven't placed my finger on it yet, but when I do...
:-/ Perplexed.
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Date: 2004-07-12 03:46 pm (UTC)*facepalm* Oops. Thank you.
Hm. If you do pin it down, let me know. I know I do take advantage of the fact that you can ascribe just about any emotion to Tezuka in private; I may have taken it too far in this one. Maybe the implied history needs to be fleshed out more to support their interaction?
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Date: 2004-07-12 09:43 pm (UTC)Hmmm... good point. You're right. that's it. Tezuka just seems too... emotionally *open* all of a sudden...
{happyily} well, that solves that mystery! Now, when's the next part???
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Date: 2004-07-28 09:20 pm (UTC)Tezuka x Oishi is so raaaaare and it was so well described, and Oishi's pov is just perfect and
*o* that I can't be constructive. I love this pairing so much and your fic was marvelous, so thank you !!
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Date: 2004-07-29 01:14 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-19 07:40 pm (UTC)Anyway, I was just wondering if you'd be at all interested in letting me host some/all of your FMA Yaoi fanfiction. If you don't want to, take a look at the site anyway! ♥ I apologize if you just didn't want to respond to the e-mail, but I don't remember getting a response from you. So, I thought it might be a good idea to send you a comment incase the e-mail just didn't make it!
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Date: 2004-09-19 08:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-21 07:10 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-01-27 11:55 pm (UTC)Ohmigosh! What a totally unexpected and utterly delightful little surprise! Imagine that; Ooishi and Tezuka. Intimate. Together. Love this -- absolutely adore it! *_*
(Tinyminimal unimportant nitpick: The heat wound it's way into his bones... There's an its/it's error in there. <:) )
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Date: 2005-01-28 12:18 am (UTC)*checks final revisions* Ack! It even made it though there! Thank you for pointing that one out. I do that constantly. ^_^;