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Fic post from my archive.

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This story takes place in a quantum bubble of the Challengeverse (maybe it happened, maybe it didn't), immediately following "The Continuation of War". Tezuka offers Oishi some support after his very bad day. Porn with Characterization, I-3

It had not been a relaxing day for Oishi Shuichirou.

Date: 2004-07-09 12:25 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] anruik
You spoil us, you know *amused, snugs* Not that we mind, of course~ *innocent*

Date: 2004-07-09 12:38 am (UTC)
ext_1114: (come and get me)
From: [identity profile] written-in-blue.livejournal.com
Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

Is there anything you write that won't turn me into Em-goo? No? I thought not.

Date: 2004-07-09 01:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] naanima.livejournal.com
....

Tezuka/Oishi porn.

....

*fans self*

More?

*dump truck after truck of truffles*

Date: 2004-07-09 02:08 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] anruik
She dumped truffles.... The ULTIMATE REWARD! *gasps*

Date: 2004-07-09 02:57 am (UTC)
ext_1114: (moral fiber)
From: [identity profile] written-in-blue.livejournal.com
Oishi is nothing if not obliging. Even when you're putting him through the angst wringer.

Oishi: [grimace] Damn my accomodating nature.

Yanagi/Inui! Squee! SQUEE!

Date: 2004-07-09 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] naanima.livejournal.com
Then IGNORE everything EXCEPT for the Yanagi/Inui!!!!

Just the thought of Yanagi/Inui make me squee with happiness and joy.

(Of course they are obliging. They know their chances of failure very well. So they may as well sit back and enjoy the ride ^___^)

Love you darling *hugglesglomp*

*waits*

Date: 2004-07-09 03:13 am (UTC)
ext_9905: (Default)
From: [identity profile] soloproject.livejournal.com
No...why? WHY? Now I WON'T EVER GET USED TO THE IDEA OF TEZUKA BEING WITH ANYONE ELSE! AUGH!

It really doesn't get better than this...except um...*cough* YanaInui and...*hack* ♥ I've missed this pair, really, I have. \(^o^)/

Date: 2004-07-09 06:06 am (UTC)
ext_9905: (matrix kiyo)
From: [identity profile] soloproject.livejournal.com
Hmm...mebbe. Is that the fishing one? *raises eyebrow*

Yes, darksmut. Exactly. Is there some kind of ummm...like a fluffy red-eyed black plot bunny amongst the fray?

But ok...I'll take read your FujiMizu stuff again and leave you alone on the *cough* FujiKiri. XD

Date: 2004-07-09 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lechaco.livejournal.com
wonderful once again even if I don't ship this pairing. XD; very erotic :B

Date: 2004-07-09 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lechaco.livejournal.com
haha I wish I were that good with pairings I don't ship. if I don't ship it, if I don't feel their mojo, it's very hard for me to come up with anything for them. XD but you did so well here :D!

yay the AtoYuki bunny may have a new home :D!! thanks XD<3 you're awesome. oh I wholly blame myself too. XD I don't even know how I got on the topic of AtoYuki but once I got onto it, I started liking it and omg it just works so well with renaissance and art and kfdlajdk *brain breaks from the pretty overload*

Date: 2004-07-09 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
{blinksblinks}

Omake... means... parody, ne?

Don't get me wrong... it was--is--a good story... but... but... {spurtters} It's OISHI! and TEZUKA! WTF!!! {wails and pulls at hair}

My brain... can't... compute....

Other than that minor user-problem...

Really did like way you described the relationship between captain and vice captain... and between these two friends. How they can support each other with Oishi's openness and Tezuka's seemingly unending strength...

(and then my brain fried when they started kissing >.< )

Date: 2004-07-09 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
really? I mean, I first learned of 'omake' through the fanbase, that it should be like a mockery of certain scenes... like the screen caps after the credits of the show--the chibi caps? an omake...

{waves hand} I'll ask my boss at class tonight.

And it's not nice to fry your readers brains!!!! How I'm a supposed to WRITE when my brain is *fried*???? HUH????

Date: 2004-07-09 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] branchfic.livejournal.com
*stares into space*

I am taken with a sudden vision of this story taking place during the closing credits of Continuation, in chibi form.

*falls out of chair laughing*

OMG. Ok, excuse me, but I am inspired, and must go change the title, right now. Oh, it's perfect.

Date: 2004-07-09 06:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
huh? what?

{blinks}

{thinks}|

{re-reads}

@.@ Ooooooh...

{falls out of chair laughing}

Date: 2004-07-09 06:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
huh? what?

{blinks}

{thinks}|

{re-reads}

@.@ Ooooooh...

{falls out of chair laughing}

Date: 2004-07-09 06:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
Oh, jeesh... I've only been in the fanbase for... for... {blinks} well, damn... five? six years? shit... That's not *that* long, really...

{pouting} glad I could help inspire... even if it's *still* an Oishi & Tezuka fic....

Hey! I thought there was supposed to be Fuji & Tezu action!!!!

Okay... gotta ask... "Stop here to actuate signal"??? Huh???

Date: 2004-07-11 11:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
yes. in case you were wondering, I *did* notice how you avoiding the other comments....

Date: 2004-07-11 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
{sniffles} {pouts} well, okay.... as long as the characters are surprising *you*, too... {grins}

{wonders what *other* surprises are in store...}

Date: 2004-07-09 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] anruik
"Omake" is generally the same as "Extra". Kind of like an added little thing just because the author/mangaka feels like adding it in. It's just that omake usually ends up being comedic, though not always.

Ex: Ever read some of the Gundam manga? Those little chibi comic strips at the end of the books? Like how to draw Trowa, or Heero using Duo's braid for a brush? That sort of thing? Those are omake.

Date: 2004-07-09 06:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
Yeah! yeah! I guess because they always seem comedic I just associated them with 'parody'.


(and yes, although it's been a while, I do remember the 'braid for a paint brush' incident' ^__^)

Date: 2004-07-09 08:34 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] anruik
It's hard to forget that braid for a brush incident. XD

Date: 2004-07-09 01:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mica-chan.livejournal.com
I really had to laught with your reaction because....I've always been so in love with Tezuka/Oishi pair. To me (even though I love a lot of pairs in PoT) they are one of the best couple in this anime.
I never could understang why people couldn't see how well they are together...

Date: 2004-07-09 01:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
Oh, no! I can completely read any pairing. Usually. And normally I don't have a problem (well, there was this one fic, but I've erased it from my memory), but...

but... but... This story had all the setting ups for a Fuji-Tez relationship... and my mind had fitted itself for that schema... and then...

WHAM!!! I literally... could not... compute... my brain actually stopped reading and understanding what was going on right after Tezuka kissed Oishi.

I swear... it's the weirdest thing... I don't think it's ever happened to me before.... >.< '''

Date: 2004-07-09 01:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mica-chan.livejournal.com
Heheheheh...I think I can understand you. Unfortunatly (or fortunatly) I don't share the same destiny, because even if I could see the hints to a TezuFuji story, I also could see the base to a wonderful TezukaOishi. But this, probably is because I love this pair and can't imagine one without other (I really never was a Golden Pair fan or a TezukaFuji fan).

Sometimes I envy who can read all kind of pairs...I'm not like this. When I dislike something (like MomoRyo, for example...or Golden Pair) I can't force myself into it (with rare, rare exceptions).

Date: 2004-07-11 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
There were no *hints* for Fuji-Tez, it was darn right *blatant*... Even Yukimura said so. {nods}

Still, I'll admit to there not being enough good Tezu-Oishi fics out there.

See, in my mind, the characters naturally pair off--funnily enough, into all the Seigaku pairings you don't like. ^.^--but if the story is well written and the characterization done right, it's easy to see how any pairing might couple. It's the same with the boys being straight. I can see them all being hetero without stretching my mind to the limits, but if I'm going to read it in a story (even mine) I want it to be darn right believable.

You know what I'm saying?

We've got ourselves a great author here, though, so I'm sure now that I've given my mind a chance to adjust to the shock of it all, there won't be any problem.

In fact (after being *forced* {grins teasingly} to like Tez/Atobe), I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out... She has her work cut out for her, though, doesn't?

never thought I'd see this

Date: 2004-07-09 11:47 am (UTC)
ext_9800: (Default)
From: [identity profile] issen4.livejournal.com
A convincing Tezuka and Oishi, that is. I guess it's because it's all Golden Pair, Golden Pair, and occasionally I get the crazy (heretical?) thought maybe they aren't married; after all, Eiji didn't even know that Oishi was a bowling enthusiast in the bowling episode. But there's so much GP--and some of it is lovely so I treat all of it as AU.

Ahem, to get back to the point. I love your Oishi. It's nice to know that he's not some super-patient, long-suffering Japanese boy who gets stamped with the 'mother' label. Well, not one who doesn't get any sex, anyway. Especially sex with Tezuka-with-personality.

Date: 2004-07-09 12:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mica-chan.livejournal.com
Oh, my God! I. LOVE. YOU! I really, really love. You don't have any idea how happy you made me.
I simple LOVE Tezuka and Oishi together. They are the best pair in my opinion. I love, love, love them. And it's so rare to find any fic with them together. Everybody always write Tezuka with Fuji and...well, that's not a pair that I like. And Tezuka/Oishi is a rarity and you as always were perfect. So, I love you even more now for doing it.

Thank you, thank you, thank you so much.

And I know I didn't do any sense in this comment, but...that's because I'm too happy to be real ^_^

*** PS: I'm definetly not used to listen Oishi being called Shuichirou...

Date: 2004-07-12 11:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
very few people gave Tezuka attitude for long once they had played against him. Well, very few people, aside from Echizen, who gave absolutely everybody attitude, and could actually be considered becomingly respectful, by comparison, for moderating the back talk he gave his captain.

{laughing} you know... this reminds me of what Aishuu and I were talking about with Echizen and his maturity--or lack there of--and how his attitude towards respect is very much one of a more American upbringing.

~~

it had been the crack about Niou's own captain that had been the last straw

This is such a telling observation about Oishi's character. Where Yukimura would have laughed it off and/or played into Niou's teasing, Oishi took offense for him... or maybe I'm reading this wrong?

~~~

sspp... I noticed this 'cause of someone else's comment, but, the third paragraph---"Oishi's teeth were grinding"...

~~~

mmmm... Tezuka's hands... massage.... damn, I bet that feels good....


~~~

I don't know... maybe I'm a liar, and I really can't read most pairings... but this.. still didn't sit right with me. Not so much with it being Tezuka and Oishi, but... but with it being Tezuka. Tezuka seemed off to me. I haven't placed my finger on it yet, but when I do...

:-/ Perplexed.


Date: 2004-07-12 09:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
yeah, I figured you'd want to know about that--I honestly didn't notice it the first couple of times, I'm so used to switching back and forth in my own narratives. ^.^;;

Hmmm... good point. You're right. that's it. Tezuka just seems too... emotionally *open* all of a sudden...

{happyily} well, that solves that mystery! Now, when's the next part???

Date: 2004-07-28 09:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] histoirede.livejournal.com
You made my day with this fic.
Tezuka x Oishi is so raaaaare and it was so well described, and Oishi's pov is just perfect and
*o* that I can't be constructive. I love this pairing so much and your fic was marvelous, so thank you !!

Date: 2004-09-19 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unknownhasunuma.livejournal.com
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Anyway, I was just wondering if you'd be at all interested in letting me host some/all of your FMA Yaoi fanfiction. If you don't want to, take a look at the site anyway! ♥ I apologize if you just didn't want to respond to the e-mail, but I don't remember getting a response from you. So, I thought it might be a good idea to send you a comment incase the e-mail just didn't make it!

Feel free to respond to me at:
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I hope this reaches you and thank you for taking the time to read this!

Date: 2004-09-21 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unknownhasunuma.livejournal.com
Thank you! I apologize for the miscommunication! Awesome! ♥

Date: 2005-01-27 11:55 pm (UTC)
ext_7549: (I have a HAT!)
From: [identity profile] solaas.livejournal.com
Whatwhatwhat?! *sparkles*

Ohmigosh! What a totally unexpected and utterly delightful little surprise! Imagine that; Ooishi and Tezuka. Intimate. Together. Love this -- absolutely adore it! *_*



(Tinyminimal unimportant nitpick: The heat wound it's way into his bones... There's an its/it's error in there. <:) )

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