PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Eight

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Eight

The team starts to recover, and Niou and Yagyuu find another kind of comfort. Drama with Porn, I-4

It stretched him to the edge of pain, but never quite over. It was, perfectly, everything he desired of his partner, every reason he pressed Yagyuu to let himself go, the extremity of sensation that could have been destruction but, to him, was not.

Comments

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

Oooh... *goood* point... Yukimura, while one seemingly ruthless beautiful boy, probabably *wouldn't* approve of the extremes to which Kiri's allowed himself, now would he? Actually, you've already answered that--he wouldn't. But... Yagyuu has a very good point, too... that same wildness seems to be exactly what *Sanada* needs... oh, what a tangled web elf-boy's getting himself caught in... {starts humming "torn between two lovers"}


[pictures Akaya pushing/pulling Sanada along] Ne, ne... Bu~nny? {grins}

[Real quick break in reading] 'omniscient'? Yukimura? {grins} gods I love it! {jumps rigth back to reading where she left off with baited breath}


[dissolves into giggles] oh... dear.... That... was just a *great* way to end a soul-rendering encounter.... [shoulders still shaking with barely controlled mirth]

[branchandroot]

We *all* needed some comic relief by the end of this chapter.

*muses* I think SanaKiri is definitely on the menu for the future. Curiously, I'm not as sure about YukiKiri; I'm not sure Sei-chan would let himself do that while Akaya is still under his care. Hmmm.

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

that's very true---the reactions of everyone alone (not even including the characters!) proves that some comin relief was needed; and didn't you just execute it perfectly? {huggle-glomps}

SenaKiri would be hot--and I do mean that literally. All angry and fiery and *burning*.... As for the YukiKiri, while Sei-chan probably *wouldn't* do anything that might be considered taking *advantage* of someone in his charge (at least, not *that* type of advantage) I think he *would* 'care' for Kirihara if the elf needed it. And while Sanada and Yukimura are probably both very passionate lovers, there's no denying that their styles would be very different, even when they're together. It's just their personalities--Yukimura dominates with a seemingly gentle hand, a loving affection.

(I suddenly *really* want to see some more Yukimura loving....)