PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Eight

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Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Eight

The team starts to recover, and Niou and Yagyuu find another kind of comfort. Drama with Porn, I-4

It stretched him to the edge of pain, but never quite over. It was, perfectly, everything he desired of his partner, every reason he pressed Yagyuu to let himself go, the extremity of sensation that could have been destruction but, to him, was not.

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it didn't occur to any of them to suggest that Yukimura might not have approved.

Another thing I agree with. Akaya's play style is so violent...it's really not tennis. I mean with Shinjyo (from Jyosei Shounan), Hanamura emphasizes very explicitly that his Deep Impact technique (not really unlike Akaya's, though less berserkerish) is not to be used, that it's unnaceptable. Akaya's pretty much been left alone to play whichever way he wants but his teammates still stare and call him a monster behind his back. Meanwhile, Sanada just nods and pets him when he wins. Meanwhile, we can't help but wonder if Yukimura (presumably of good heart and soul and honest sportsmanship, etc.) knows that Akaya's uncaged? Akaya then, in essence, is who Sanada is on the inside. So, I'm glad for this portrayal.

(Whoa...so effin' deep. I'm shocked at myself. -_-)

Now for the fun part....yeah! I'm so ecstatic. Yagyuu is seme, seme, seme!!! (although I don't mind at all either way) Can I just say the last part had me squirming with pleasure in my seat? and it ended on such a perfect note.

And Yukimura is so...well, I suffer from lack of him in manga and anime so we love him through fic. This fic, in fact. ^_^ On to the next!

[branchandroot]

*nodnod* I would say that's why Yukimura objects to Akaya cutting loose; he wants Akaya to play tennis, not some twisted kind of back-alley fighting. But Sanada, while it's tennis he plays, is unstable enough right now, without Yukimura, to use Akaya's violence both as a means to win and as a vicarious release for himself. Such messed up boys...

*huge grin* That's what a sex scene should do! ^_^V

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Oh...release? So Akaya is Sanada's orgasm unleashed ...I have such a damn, dirty mind. Just ignore me, hahahahah! XDDDD