PoT: Mirror Writing: Innocence and Experience

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Innocence and Experience

Immediately follows "Confluence". What would happen if they weren't in public... Porn Without Plot, I-4

Choutarou's straightforward sensuality could still surprise him, sometimes.

Comments

[mllelaurel.livejournal.com]

What a way to end a day! *fans self, and reaches for the A/C* These two are far too cute for their own damned good. ^_^;

I did notice a couple of minor grammar bloopers on my second readthrough:
as he fished out the bottle that usually lived an empty tennis ball can
Do you mean 'inside an empty tennis ball can'?
he thrust his fingers deep inside his partner's Deep, but still slow.
The two sentences got blurred together, here.

One last thing. Re: The whole 'summer seminar affair':
Did you make Shishido's phrasing, the time he mentioned this little tidbit of information purposely similar to the phrasing used by Atobe, earlier on? And, if so, does that mean what I think it means?

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

Yanno, that's a plot bunny worth keeping. :3 [feeds it carrots]

[lurves on Roy a bit]

[branchandroot]

Oh, ack! Thank you so much, I need to go fix those. 'S what I get for proofing too fast...

*wild laugh* Ah, ten points to you, you noticed! Yes, indeed, it was on purpose, and yes, it probably does mean what you think. *wicked grin* I think it's going to come up again, later, too.

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

It's scary when fandoms cross-pollinate, isn't it?

I love a Choutarou who knows exactly what he's, er, up to. [baps self for bad pun]

[branchandroot]

Yes, it is. I can't imagine where else he got it from; only Roy calls me Madam. Well, Atobe when he wants to be annoying, but he's never serious about it.

Hey, the boy knows his own mind. And other body parts, too. *grins* Tori-on-top is definitely in the bunny-corral.

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

Saaa!

{happy glow} mmmm... you know... {blinks} I think this is my first Ryou-Choutaroh fic... {blinks} that can't be right... {shakes head} no, must be 'cause Choutaroh's being so fricking "top" in my head {sighs}

{giggles} oiya! is that a bunny or five I see for future scenes? Hmmm..... here bunny, bunny, bunny... {offers some alfalfa and salt cubes}

[branchandroot]

Five, six, a dozen...

Choutarou would make a great top, I am firmly convinced. They just need a little while to work up to it. *grins*

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

Yeah... and he's so cute! {sweet mode} Even if they're anal about being absolutely prepared to start...

[exwaiz.livejournal.com]

^_^ ToriShishi PWP = <3 x 100. Heh. I guess it's obvious by now that I love this pairing. Ohtori is such a tease, but that's why he's so special. :D

Ohtori taking lessons from Roy? *falls to the floor, laughing* The mental image! So does this mean that Shishido will be taking lessons from Ed? *gets bricked*

[branchandroot]

*eyes crossing* Urk! I have enough trouble with Ed getting along so well with Atobe. It's the philosophers, you know. No, it's Hughes that Shishido thinks is fun.

^___^

[arithion.livejournal.com]

I'm sorry I only feedbacked to this chapter/part.... but I did read them all.

This was an excellent little series, with lovely characterisation and completely believable progression. A really enjoyable read.

Thank you so much for sharing it. I only wish I could coax you into writing a FujixTez series hehe...

[branchandroot]

Delightful, glad you liked it!

TezuFuji bunnies are lurking in the underbrush, but the others have been a lot more aggressive, so far. *tries to pry MomoRyo bunny teeth off ankle* Guess we'll see. ^_-

[sharona1x2.livejournal.com]

You've so totally made my day. It was a pleasure reading all of the ToriShishi fics, and ending it with a lovely and subtle lemon was just perfect.

Thank you so much for these stories. I hope you'll continue to write Ohtori and Shishido in the future. *wishes you the best of luck*

[solaas.livejournal.com]

^______________^

These two are the sweetest, and an Ootori with seduction on his agenda is a wonderful thing indeed.

Am pitifully pleased with self for spotting and recognising the titles for this branch immediately, especially since I don't read poetry (much). :) And the more I think about it, the more I come to the conclusion that either one of them could be the Tyger. They both have the fire in them, although they express is differently.

Of course, Shishido is both embarrassed and disgruntled over being exposed like that, but I'm sure Ootori will placeate him. ;)

[branchandroot]

*grins* They do both have fire, and in some ways I think the Innocent one is Shishido. I've always read him as far more straightforward than Ohtori.

^_^V