PoT: Mirror Writing: The Winner Is...
May. 15th, 2004 09:28 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
branchandrootFic post from my archive.
Mizuki and Fuji play head games with each other.
The slow smile that curved Shuusuke's mouth would have sent any sane person running, very far and very fast. Just as well, probably, that Hajime had never made any strong claims to sanity when he was in pursuit of a goal he wanted.
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Date: 2004-08-31 01:42 pm (UTC)I love the way you write Mizuki and Yuuta. Way too many people think that teenagers only do fluffy loff, and aren't as capable of playing at mindgames. Your Yuuta is deliciously strong. As for Mizuki, wow, what a gamble that boy takes, nothing but applause for his braveness from here.
The only thing that leaves me wondering is why Syuusuke would do that. To win some sort of game over Mizuki? Hardly, as he's smart enough to figure out that he just gave Mizuki what he wanted, even if he did take him down a notch on the way. The mind boggles as to why Fuji would do this while he is with Kippei, he doesn't strike me as the cheating type. Then again, maybe that's not what their relationship is like, or perhaps I just have to keep on reading to find out, which I will do now.
Absolutely mindblowing fic you're writing. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2004-08-31 04:43 pm (UTC)*nods* I remember some of the stuff we did to each other's heads at that age, and these guys are sharper on the draw than anyone I remember dealing with!
I did do my best to explain Fuji's motives in the next story. If it still doesn't make sense after that, tell me? I'm working on mass revisions right now, and I know what I tried to do with him is pretty complex.
At any rate, thanks again!