epic sap

[branchandroot]

Ah, what the heck, it's done I'll post it now.

So, here's the *really really sappy* part of the epic that bit me.

Three parts long, lots of sap, lemon in part two.

http://www.alltrees.org/hybrid/writing/FMA/morning1.html

crossposted at fm_alchemist

Comments

[driftingfocus.livejournal.com]

You write these two so well... And your endings are very well done in that you leave the reader contemplative and satisfied. I yearn for more, and yet I don't, because it was all resolved so well.

Well done.

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[branchandroot]

*happy sigh* Thank you.