FMA epic start

[branchandroot]

Ok, here's the first chapter of the epic that bit me. Linked off site because I'm sick of messing around with code that's scrozzled on one end or the other.

Antagonism is the main warning for this chapter.

http://www.alltrees.org/hybrid/writing/FMA/ever.ch1.html

Back to ch. 2.

Comments

Re: *sputter*

[arete.livejournal.com]

Heh, crushes are cute. Yeah, I could see how the armor would increase his diffidence--both he and Ed are very conscious to how people react to them physically, Al had to know that he had to extremely careful with how he physically interacted with people. I love the dynamics between the brothers... one of my favorite things in the canon/fanon.

Re: *sputter*

[branchandroot]

Exceedingly cute. So cute that Ed just may kill me when we get to that part.

Hm. I think you'll like chapter two.