PoT: Mirror Writing: Long Exposure - One

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Long Exposure: One

Upon meeting again in the hospital, after Seigaku plays Rikkai, Tachibana decides Fuji could use a friend outside of tennis. Drama With Romance, I-3

He'd been told before, most notably by his little sister, that he worried too much. But he couldn't shake off a feeling of responsibility for this injury.

Comments

[bluedelirium.livejournal.com]

Thinking about this pairing makes my head hurt. >_< It makes a lot of sense, though I would never have thought about it before this.... You've got Fuji really, really well. And Fuji is... difficult to get right.

Kippei also; his determination and quiet compassion. A lot of his patience. The thing about him not playing Fuji says so much about his character, and Fuji's, and even Tezuka's. Nice. ^_^

[branchandroot]

*pleased* Fuji is hard, glad you think I got him right. Thanks!

Have you gotten to *counts in head* the low hundreds, yet? TachiFuji makes far more sense after you actually see the hospital scenes. It never occured to me before then. It implied, to me, that Fuji sees parallels between Tezuka and Tachibana, and once I paired off Tezuka and Atobe for this arc, these two just kind of fell together.

[bluedelirium.livejournal.com]

The scene where Fuji brings him flowers, yeah. At the time I just took it as a Fuji-being-weird-again scene, but... there did seem to be a lot of implicit understanding.

Your arc almost makes me like Atobe, you know.... But I just can't get over my general dislike- I'm like, hey Tenipuri fic! By Emily! About.... eeh, Atobe.... If you write more about Fuji messing with him, I'll probably start sympathizing more.... //incredibly nonsubtle hint

[branchandroot]

*chuckles* There is another messing-with-him bunny in the works.