PoT: Mirror Writing: Pace

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Pace

Tezuka convinces Atobe to take things a little slower. Porn With Insights, I-4

Tezuka was currently engaged in poaching the fish with ginger shoots. This otherwise blameless activity was holding all of Keigo's attention, because the look in Tezuka's eyes at one or two points during the afternoon indicated to him that his fishing partner had, to put it euphemistically, plans for the evening.

Comments

[wanderingscribe.livejournal.com]

Very, very, very nice. I've never been too much into AtoTezu, but the way you write it is...what's the word I want? Complete. You show all sides of the relationship, from the hot and sweaty, to the slow and comforting. Not many can make a relationship feel that natural, including myself, so you're in rare company. ^_^

Thank you for sharing such good work.

[branchandroot]

Thank *you* for such wonderful encouragement. It's good to know I'm doing some justice to two very complex characters.

[wanderingscribe.livejournal.com]

Ah, heck. I'm just being honest, really. You're the one with the skill. =^_^= <---aw, you made me blush.