YnM: Sky Diving: Polarization - Part Three

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Polarization: Part Three

Watari finally succeeds in becoming a woman, and Tatsumi finally finds out why he wanted to so badly. And why Enma is so upset about it. Drama with Romance and Porn, I-4

He suspected he'd get a lot worse than a docked paycheck if he was found out, but the tightness around Watari's eyes and the tension of her mouth were more than he could ignore. He liked most of his co-workers, even when they were being idiots or breaking expensive things, but Watari...

Watari was the only one who laughed at him.

Comments

[7veilsphaedra.livejournal.com]

This is such an interesting story. The interaction between Watari and Enma reminds me of the myth of Hercules and Atlas, if Hercules were a transexual shinigami from Kyoto. Yay!

"Not in your lab," almost sounds like "not on your life" --- for good reason. Tatsumi is the essence of cautiousness.

Good work!

[branchandroot]

Thank you!

*nodnod* From the whole Golden Bird, Jade Hare thing, I have to figure Enma is trying to create something of great power. And I could only think that he wants either conquest or freedom out of it; that seems to be the YnM pattern. And after this long? I thought freedom made more sense, the poor schmuck.