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Fic post from my archive.

Degrees of Silver

Yue likes the rain. Drama, I-2

The doors to the porch were open, and the sound of heavy, steady rain came through.

Date: 2007-05-15 07:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] written-in-blue.livejournal.com
*pets them* Mmmm. I envy Yue his rain, just now.

Touya is such a sweetie.

Date: 2007-05-15 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] majochan.livejournal.com
Lacking a good Yue icon, have a chibi-Seiran instead. <3

I enjoy your fics a lot because while I'm a big fan of the Touya/Yukito-Yue pairing, sometimes the heavy-handed angst gets to me. This is just the perfect combination of serious and waffy.^^

Majo

Date: 2007-05-15 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] majochan.livejournal.com
Angst is rather unavoidable with Yue involved, but most people let it drive the fic instead of working with it. And moderating with little hearts and flowers. XD

It's nice to see them interacting normally like really good friends/maybe more instead of the usual "OMG, I had to take your powers! It's all my fault!" (the 'my' part being applicable to Yukito, Yue and sometimes even Sakura).

And I don't think I've commented on the others but the first bit about Touya asking Yue to try the apple pie filling was kind of hot awesome.^^

Majo

Date: 2007-05-15 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] majochan.livejournal.com
*nod* It's the gradual progression that's so satisfying, because no matter what the fangirls think, if Touya went and threw Yue down, what would happen most likely would not be a ravishing.

And yes, bringing food into Yue's image does help a lot with the 'I'm a magical being and not of this earth' impression he radiates. Just the thought of Yue doing something as normal as licking a spoon makes me squee...

*cough* I'll stop now.^^; I look forward to whatever else you might write.

Majo

Date: 2007-05-15 09:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] solesakuma
Lovely! It's nice to see YuexTouya.

Date: 2007-05-15 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com
I could hate you for how torturously slow this seems to be going, but it wouldn't be even half as good if it wasn't progressing so carefully. It does make me wonder who's going to "jump" who first... or rather, who's going to make the next move on who, as Touya already made a move to include Yue more with the food, and now Yue's not pushing him away, even in this moment of solitude...

[goes mushy and warm and gooey and oh-so-mmmmmm]
I really like this "Taming of Yue" as it were.
Looking forward to reading more!

Date: 2007-05-16 01:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cygna-hime.livejournal.com
Awww. I really love the quiet in this piece; it works really well with the content, and your descriptions of the rain especially are lovely.

Date: 2007-11-03 03:11 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] forochel.livejournal.com
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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee~~~ ♥♥♥♥♥


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