PoT: Standalone: Demonstration

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Demonstration

In honor of issue 250 of the manga. After that match Tezuka and Oishi have wild sex in the locker room. Porn Without Plot, I-4, manga continuity obviously

"Ah! Tezuka..." Shuichirou leaned his head back against the wall, panting now. "You took me slow once already today. Hurry up."

Tezuka laughed low in his throat at this interpretation of their match. "If you like. Turn around, then."

Comments

[cutter-tekka.livejournal.com]

Hmm, it's difficult for me to go from zero to Tezuka/Oishi smut unless I'm in a certain mood, but one thing that caught my attention:

"Tezuka. Fuck me hard. Fuck me as hard as you play me."

I found myself paying more attention from this line forward. Not that I'd been skimming before or anything, but there's always got to be this moment where the smut is doing something other than the physical, some concept or hook or idea that will keep me interested, and this was definitely it for me here. I've always thought that would have to be the really preoccupying desire for anyone truly interested in becoming Tezuka's lover: having him let go with you the same way that he lets go with tennis. Because that single-minded, intense pressure is what makes him Tezuka, and it's the thing that's sexy about him, and it's why he's truest when he's playing. So anyone who wanted him would have to want that, and it's not necessarily a given that they would get it without asking.

But if you got it, the energy he put into tennis put into you, it would blow your mind.

Ryouma in particular, I think, would need/want this if he were a Tezuka lover--I thought about that during the Yaru arc, because that Ryouma was so well-done that he could continue to live in my head and I could converse with him afterwards. So we talked about that a little, he and I. ^_^

And this has been your random Cutter-rambling for the day.

[branchandroot]

Have I mentioned, lately, that I love you? Because I do. You're such a gratifyingly thoughtful reader. That's it exactly, what I was going for with this whole story. The issue in question centered so clearly around Oishi pushing Tezuka as hard as he could, on the court, hard enough to almost, almost break his composure. And at the end of the match Oishi's engagement with and dedication to everything Tezuka is was so blindingly evident. I almost couldn't imagine any other way to express that, besides tennis and sex--one as hard as the other.

It's what made Atobe my first choice (well, besides Ryouma) for Tezuka's lover, and why I couldn't make my TezuFuji work until Fuji was serious enough to accept and desire that intensity.

*sparkles and glows at you*