PoT: Standalone: Demonstration

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Demonstration

In honor of issue 250 of the manga. After that match Tezuka and Oishi have wild sex in the locker room. Porn Without Plot, I-4, manga continuity obviously

"Ah! Tezuka..." Shuichirou leaned his head back against the wall, panting now. "You took me slow once already today. Hurry up."

Tezuka laughed low in his throat at this interpretation of their match. "If you like. Turn around, then."

Comments

[chinawolf.livejournal.com]

Not usually my pairing, but... guh. *fans self* Very, very nice. Thank you for sharing.

[branchandroot]

*bows* You're most welcome, glad you enjoyed!

[muscatlove.livejournal.com]

<3 God, I love TezuOishi, and not many people agree with it, let alone write fantastic character-driven smut about it. ^^ Very, very good.

[branchandroot]

Thank you! *grins* As Oishi said, my pleasure. I think their manga incarnations, in particular, are pretty hot together.

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Soverytasty.\

I have given up trying to figure out what Konomi is up to. Whatever genre tenipuri is, straight shonen certainly isn't it.

[snickers and runs]

[branchandroot]

Tasty is good. ^_^

You are so very right. These last few issues I'm wondering if he's trying to make up for Tarzan of the Tennis Court. I swear they all look even more tasty than usual.

[hikariblue.livejournal.com]

Yeah, that was hot.

[branchandroot]

*beams* Glad you liked it, love.

[essie07.livejournal.com]

I do believe this is the first time I've read a Tezu/Oishi pairing. You made the first read unbelievably hot and engaging!

Mmm... I hope to see more of this in the future!

[branchandroot]

Thank you!

It isn't an entirely common pairing, but it has its following. More after this issue, I imagine. I like to play with it every now and then.

[maeran.livejournal.com]

Mrrrow. Emily-san, you know how to indulge a fangirl. Mmm, ExoticTruffle!Smut.

...

I should send you some of those truffles. And now I have a most insane craving for them.

[branchandroot]

Truffles are always welcome. ^_^

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

Oh, Emily, I've already said I love you!?? Because I really do. I was missing a fic (not to say a really good) with Tezuka and Oishi for soooo long.
I've already told you I totally love this pair and it's a pleasure each time I see you writing with a pair I love (and you did it with them twice! You're perfect!!).
I'd liked to had read Genius 250....I miss Tezuka so much...

[branchandroot]

*grins* You are very welcome; glad you enjoyed it!

Honestly, Tezuka's return seems to make everyone in the manga hotter. It's like magic...

[lady-mari-chan.livejournal.com]

{Folds report she's working on into fan and begins fanning herself} Oh my!

{Realizes she just ruined her report} Oh Crap!

Ah well, it was worth it. ^_^

[branchandroot]

*wicked smile* Just the response I was going for, thank you.

[ii-hanashi.livejournal.com]

Ooooh, preeetty. It's amazing how you manage to bring across their characters so well with so little dialogue. *coughs* The smut was hot too. I didn't entirely understand all of what was being said in Genius 250, but it seems like this story could have fit right in. If this was a different type of manga. Or if Konomi-sensei would just come out and admit that PoT is that type of manga. ^_~

[branchandroot]

*takes a bow* Thank you! I do find that Tezuka is easier to write the less I try to make him talk--strange, but there it is.

I didn't quite get all of 250, either. ^_^; But this seemed close, based on what people who can actually read Japanese said about it, and after how hot they both looked in this issue I just couldn't help myself.

Or if Konomi-sensei would just come out and admit that PoT is that type of manga. ^_~

*grins* It sure looks like it is, doesn't it? It just took Konomi a while to realize that he likes us fangirls best, and should do nice things for us...

[naanima.livejournal.com]

.... ghuh... LOVE! MAD RABU!

I have this soft spot for Oishi fics not involving Kikumaru (not that I don't like Eiji it's just that Oishi by himself is so damn fascinating).

[branchandroot]

*snugs* Me, too, actually. Manga!Oishi, especially, is a fascinating character. He deserves more than to be the stereotype of Seigaku's Mommy.

...and he and Tezuka are hot in bed. Or up against the wall, as the case may be.

[cutter-tekka.livejournal.com]

Hmm, it's difficult for me to go from zero to Tezuka/Oishi smut unless I'm in a certain mood, but one thing that caught my attention:

"Tezuka. Fuck me hard. Fuck me as hard as you play me."

I found myself paying more attention from this line forward. Not that I'd been skimming before or anything, but there's always got to be this moment where the smut is doing something other than the physical, some concept or hook or idea that will keep me interested, and this was definitely it for me here. I've always thought that would have to be the really preoccupying desire for anyone truly interested in becoming Tezuka's lover: having him let go with you the same way that he lets go with tennis. Because that single-minded, intense pressure is what makes him Tezuka, and it's the thing that's sexy about him, and it's why he's truest when he's playing. So anyone who wanted him would have to want that, and it's not necessarily a given that they would get it without asking.

But if you got it, the energy he put into tennis put into you, it would blow your mind.

Ryouma in particular, I think, would need/want this if he were a Tezuka lover--I thought about that during the Yaru arc, because that Ryouma was so well-done that he could continue to live in my head and I could converse with him afterwards. So we talked about that a little, he and I. ^_^

And this has been your random Cutter-rambling for the day.

[branchandroot]

Have I mentioned, lately, that I love you? Because I do. You're such a gratifyingly thoughtful reader. That's it exactly, what I was going for with this whole story. The issue in question centered so clearly around Oishi pushing Tezuka as hard as he could, on the court, hard enough to almost, almost break his composure. And at the end of the match Oishi's engagement with and dedication to everything Tezuka is was so blindingly evident. I almost couldn't imagine any other way to express that, besides tennis and sex--one as hard as the other.

It's what made Atobe my first choice (well, besides Ryouma) for Tezuka's lover, and why I couldn't make my TezuFuji work until Fuji was serious enough to accept and desire that intensity.

*sparkles and glows at you*

[flamesword.livejournal.com]

oh, my. *wibbles* See, I actually love this pairing, but I have never, never seen it written well. I've been craving good TezuOishi smut since way back around ep 49-50 or so? When Tezuka plays Ryoma right before he leaves for Germany. Because it's SO obvious right there how Oishi feels about Tezuka. *g* Agree most wholeheartedly with you and Cutter, too... that intensity is in fact what makes Tezuka so fascinating. Also why he goes well with Ryoma...which I have yet to find the time to read that arc, but I am much looking forward to it. *beams* I love you. ^_^ This fic is my proof--see, I'm not crazy! It does so work! hee... See me melt into a puddle of fangirl goo now... (like I don't usually when I read your fics, but moreso. lol)

*gooooo and meltymelty*

[flamesword.livejournal.com]

Oh, I almost forgot... I didn't, and don't have time to leave proper feedback on it now, but your AS twincest, the wings one... that is sheer incandescent bliss. *nods lots* I do love them both so very much. *happy sigh of glowymeltybliss*

[arctic-dragon.livejournal.com]

Hot Hot Hot
Hmmm...not what I was expecting at all...it was so much better.
I loved the characterisations and the fact that it came over as meaningful despite the wonderful smut.
Cheers

[branchandroot]

*laughs* Thank you! That issue highlighted so many things about the relationship between these two, I just had to write an epilogue to it, and a good match almost always inspires me to write smut. One of the things that makes these boys so fun to play with. ^_^

[mirime.livejournal.com]

mmm so hot.. TezuOishi is such an unloved pairing. *sigh* nicely written :)

[branchandroot]

Thanks, glad you liked it!

[histoirede.livejournal.com]

You made my day ^-^ That's such a nice -and hot- fic (and the fact that I worship every piece of fic and art with Tezuka and Oishi as a couple as nothing to do with it ^^;) !
Nicely written, and a nice following to Genius 250. (Even if after crying Oishi I would have expected something more luffy...)
Again, thank you for writing it ^-^

[branchandroot]

*pleased* Glad you liked it! I'm very fond of this pair--they have such a wide range of possible ways to relate to each other. Whenever a story for them bites me, it's a fun one to write.

[love]

Good lord ... *shakes head* I'm sleepy so I can't think straight, but mmm, nice, I thought of so many things when I read Genius 250 and I'm so glad someone wrote some of it down. (Though I wouldn't ever have made them sex each other up ... but I've been told often my sex radar doesn't really work ...)

[branchandroot]

*grins* Glad you liked it! 250 really was an especially rich issue... even if I couldn't actually read the dialogue. ^_^;

[setra.livejournal.com]

Wow! That was... mmm yeah. I love TezuOishi, and there's entirely too little of it out there at all, let alone stories this well-written.
If I may ask, where do you find the recent issues of Jump? I'm curious to see the game that led up to this. ^__^

[branchandroot]

Thank you!

If no one else puts it up, I usually grab the raws from flowright, who is a dear, wonderful person and usually posts a zip of the raw a few days after it comes out. I'm not sure if she'll still have 250 up. *rummages in link list* These guys generally put scans up, though I'm having trouble connecting right at the moment. (http://jump.manlu.com/) And then the FET forums usually come up with a pretty good synopsis of what everyone is doing. (http://forums.golden-pair.net/viewforum.php?f=5&sid=425808773d4df7bf411d7314df4bf27a and hit the first sticky) ^_^

[gottis-chan.livejournal.com]

*___* Lovely! This is one of my favorite pairings - after Golden Pair and Tezuryo - and wow! *_* Hot-ness! Thank you!

[branchandroot]

*grins* Thanks! It's good to hear you liked it.

[hakainokami.livejournal.com]

I havent actually read the story yet. Because i'm so happy that you wrote a) another Tezuka Oishi story, and b0 that it was from 250. I felt the need to say how great that was. because there is very little Tezuka Oishi, even less good Tezuka Oishi, and a lot of its in french, which I can't read very well.

[ecchipiro.livejournal.com]

Where are those french fics?! I'm not very fluent in french either but better than nothing. *.*

[hakainokami.livejournal.com]

Wow. That was so.. in charecter and Everything. Nice.

[branchandroot]

Thank you! *grins* 250 really was the greatest TezuOishi fodder. I was stunned there weren't more stories coming out right after it. I mean, it was so perfect for those two.

[ecchipiro.livejournal.com]

Wahh TezuOishi is my fav Tezuka-pair. I loved this. Smutty and hot. ^^v

Hope you got some more in stock.

[branchandroot]

Hope you got some more in stock.

I don't do TezuOishi very often, and lately my writing is all over the map, so I don't actually know. ^_^; But it's great to hear you liked this one!

[simply-kim.livejournal.com]

hrm... I kinda liked this. XD I'm not much of a Tezuka/Oishi fan, since I LOVE AtoZuka too much... but if ever Tezuka would deviate away from Atobe, this would be more like it. XD I haven't read Genius 250 yet, sadly, but I will, once I get all the stuff I need to do done. ^_^ Anyway, I like the fact that they share some sort of connection, you were pretty accurate about that (It shows in the way you presented your fic) However, I have to say that the part where Oishi-kun said "Fuck me..." or something along those lines blew my brain off. XD I couldn't even dare thing he would say that! XD But then, it's your fic and it's your prerogative on what to do with your characters... acter all, there WERE times that Oishi had been known to switch from mother hen to being quite demanding and authoritative at the same time. So, it's possible. I can't contest to that fact. ^_^
Techie stuff-wise, i'd say you did a great job in presenting it, the grammar is good, you made clear the setting and the atmosphere as well.

Great job! ^_^

[branchandroot]

Glad you liked it.

the part where Oishi-kun said "Fuck me..." or something along those lines blew my brain off

That is, of course, the difficulty of translating a word-concept like yaru. The more "literal" translation would be do it, but that phrase, in English, can't always convey the situational intensity involved. I tend to render it differently, depending on the context. In this case, the context was fairly raw and intense, thus the cruder expression.

Oishi is a fascinating character, which is one reason I like writing from his viewpoint when he's a central character in one of my stories. His manga incarnation, in particular, is caring and conscientious without really being gentle, and he has a remarkably ruthless manipulative streak. Issue 250 showed that, and the effect it has on the team as a whole, very well. If you like the team-interaction parts of the manga, I expect you'll like that issue.