PoT: Standalone: Favors Returned
Aug. 30th, 2004 01:11 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Fic post from my archive.
Companion piece to "Games for Fun". Set after the US-Japan Senbatsu matches. Yet more gratuitous sex.
Keigo eyed Sanada's back and smiled with appreciation as Sanada tipped his head back and the spray sleeked down his hair and emphasized the sharp planes of his face.
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Date: 2004-08-30 05:54 pm (UTC)Bwahahahahahah!
What a lovely dessert to find after lunch!
Seriously, though. What I think I liked most was that we got Gen-chan's pov for the AtoSana, and Ore-sama's pov for the SanaAto. ^___^ Nicely done.
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Date: 2004-08-30 06:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-08-30 06:36 pm (UTC)Ooh...I know it's his name...and you already explained to me your point and I trully understand but...I can't like either way.
I mean..I can see 'Genichirou' as 'Genichirou' but it's too strange to see Atobe as Keigo, specially in Sanada's voice. And I really think that they wouldn't call themselves for their first names even though they were having sex.
But...put it aside, I like a lot. I confess I liked more the first part. I don't know, for some reason in this situation (I mean, in these two fics) I think Atobe on top is more plausible than the other way. Sanada being on top in this case was soooo strange.
But I liked the development of things either way and I'm happy that you wrote that, because even though I printed the MomoRyo stories, until now I haven't find any courage to read them.
'Keigo'...oh. God! Thanks a lot that you wrote Rikkai Dai fics and not Hyotei, because if I had to read a lot of 'Keigos' I would have gone totally crazy!!! ^_^
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Date: 2004-08-31 03:07 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-08-30 09:59 pm (UTC)"Just for my curiosity, what did you do after your match with Tezuka?" he asked, mildly.
"I nearly climbed the walls, actually," he replied, easily. "It was the first time I'd had a match like that. It's probably just as well," he added in a thoughtful tone, "that Tezuka and I live as far apart as we do."
*loves on that section, showers truffles, snickering* And the smut is WONDERFUL.
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Date: 2004-08-31 03:10 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-08-30 10:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-08-31 03:13 am (UTC)*sighs* I've been poking at the TezuRyo for quite some time, actually. The handful of bits I have just refuse to gel properly. It'll get there, eventually, but I don't know when eventually will be. *mournful*
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Date: 2004-08-31 03:09 am (UTC)You know. My first two initial reactions were:
1. ACK! NEW FIC! {{{squeeeeeeee}}}
and
2. Oh *shit*... this is going to mess with the Sanada-Atobe-Sanada fic I have in mind, won't it? (It didn't. Whew! I always worry about that sort of thing...)
Okay, have to say, don't know why, but I ♥ thoroughly enjoyed this second part even more so that the first♥ part. There was the wonderful dialogue interactions, of course... the two who are so seemingly *different* and yet...so damn similiar, as well. It's crazy...
Sana asking Atobe what he did after Tezuka's match & Atobe's reply had me grinning and picturing Fuji's response to that.... And then Atobe picking up on Sanada's and Yukimura's relationship... {sighs} Of course, that had me thinking about another Atobe-Yukimura exchange. ^___^
And it was all just such love... {dumps more love on you}
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Date: 2004-08-31 03:16 am (UTC)*hand over eyes* Now I'm picturing Fuji's expression while he says it... Oh, dear.
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Date: 2004-08-31 08:10 am (UTC)Ah, I do have a smidgion of a Sanada-Atobe trying to creep in on me, but we'll see how it goes.
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Date: 2004-08-31 03:11 am (UTC)*puuuuuurrrs*
SanaAto = ♥
Keigo sniffed. "You have your management techniques, I have mine," he said. "I could say as much about you, when you aren't being uptight and unthinkingly condescending." It would, he reflected, probably be less annoying if the condescension were deliberate.
OMGGOATOBE!
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Date: 2004-08-31 03:18 am (UTC)*evil grin* You know those two have got to annoy the daylights out of each other, with such diametrically opposed leadership styles. And Atobe insisted I let him say so, up front.
*snuggles the Bunny*