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Fic post from my archive.

The Color of the Phoenix's Tail: Part Three

Shuurei likes her life but wants it to be something more. Drama, I-3

"Shuurei?" Seiran came to stand beside her, leaving his own scrolls. "Is anything wrong?"

She mustered a smile for him; Seiran always worried so much when she was upset. "No, it's all right. I was just..." her voice wavered a little, despite everything she could do, "wishing I could be an official and do something good with all this."

Date: 2007-03-07 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] majochan.livejournal.com
Shuureiiiiiii<3 <3 <3

I need a cute Shuurei icon. *decides*

I love Ryuuki's logic in this, and how Shuurei's hitting him gently because she takes good care of her BOOKS. <3

Majo

Date: 2007-03-07 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] majochan.livejournal.com
Shuurei and Ryuuki 4eva! *hugs shiny OTP*

Look forward to more,
Majo

Date: 2007-03-08 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-damaskena.livejournal.com
They really do make an awesome pair. We haven't seen it yet . . . but I fear for the WORLD if they ever decide to work together on something. No one would be able to stand in their way.

::hugs her OTP:: It's so shiny . . . and so bizarrely rare . . .

Date: 2007-03-07 08:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] written-in-blue.livejournal.com
*giggling helplessly* Oh, yes, that's Shuurei all over. Bless her heart, more concerned with the books than Ryuuki's noggin.

*pets her*

Date: 2007-03-07 08:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] written-in-blue.livejournal.com
*laughing* You know you want to...

Date: 2007-03-08 02:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-damaskena.livejournal.com
DOOOOOOOOO IT!!!!

That's all I have to say about that. ::tosses the flamethrower down a well::

Date: 2007-03-08 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-damaskena.livejournal.com
I'm sure I don't know. ::serene:: I'll leave that up to you. But if it's her beloved otousan, surely it's not inconcievable. Certainly Shuurei appears to have even more trauma than we realized in her past (from hints of what's in store next season), and trauma can justify any number of things. As can loyalty, and love.

::hides:: No, I'm not the person who's working on an Assassin Ryuuki AU. Don't know what you're talking about.

Date: 2007-03-08 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-damaskena.livejournal.com
That sounds like a good start to me. ::beams::

I'm working on it! Kinda. Well, I'm kinda working on four different Saiunkoku projects at once, but that's one of them, so.

Date: 2007-03-08 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] majochan.livejournal.com
*whispers* Assassin!Ryuuki AU for the win!

Assassin Shuurei would be awesome too....

Majo

Date: 2007-03-08 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-damaskena.livejournal.com
Huzzah for Shuurei-centric! Considering that the series is about her, I find that she gets alarmingly little attention. ;-) Of course I'm at fault as much as anyone else, given my own obsessions, but even so.

In any case I really like how you depicted Shuurei's restlessness and frustration. Certainly it makes sense to me that she wouldn't wait for the boys to come up with some way to help her out-- of course she'd go forward and try to better her situation on her own! It's Shuurei to a T.

It's going to be interesting to see her balancing her connection to the palace with her soon to be Real Job. I imagine Shouka's going to stop by once she's started and make the same request he did in-series? Is Seiran going to do the same? ::hides under the table and waves her crack-pairing flag::

Just out of curiosity, how old are the various members of the main cast at this point (Seien, Ryuuki, Shuurei)?

It's so nice having something to read every day, I thank you like woah. :-D

Date: 2007-03-08 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-damaskena.livejournal.com
OMG SO YES. You have no idea how many times I was wishing she'd hit Mr. Grossg-- um, Sakujun-- where it hurt. She hits Ryuuki for a great deal less, why is it that she never hits Sakujun?

grrrrrrrr . . . .

Um, sorry. Getting carried away. ::sheepish::

I hope you don't slow down too much, in any case, because I want to read more. And filling-in-the-blanks is always good, there are loads of things I'd adore seeing from this AU. I shall wait, as patiently as I'm able.

Date: 2007-03-08 05:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-damaskena.livejournal.com
::sighs:: It's true, of course. Ryuuki tends to behave more childishly . . . more than that, I think, Shuurei feels safe around him, she doesn't have to worry about what he's going to do. Ryuuki will allow himself to be hit and yelled at and won't do a thing about it. Whereas with Sakujun there's no way Shuurei would feel comfortable doing that, even when he so richly deserves it. He wouldn't accept being hit or yelled at, and Shuurei is definately not comfortable around him.

And as Shuurei herself notes, Sakujun pushes. Ryuuki's always willing to give her a way out or back off when she's really uncomfortable, but Sakujun seems to delight in embarassing her and making her uncomfortable.

Shuurei says that the two are quite similar: I would agree, but rather say that they're opposite sides of the same thing.

. . . I'm rambling again, forgive me. ::sheepish:: As much as I dislike Sakujun and bristle like a cat every time he makes one of his smug appearances, I still find him very interesting. The thought of what it would be like if he and Ryuuki met is something I often think about (well, it kinda happens in the sidestory, but not exactly) . . .

Date: 2007-03-08 10:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hidden-gems.livejournal.com
Oh the Ryuuki Love!! I know that's not what this part was about, but still, Ryuuki!! ♥

You make me so very happy every time you post a new part ^___^

Distracted from Revision

Date: 2007-03-08 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] masqueer11.livejournal.com
Ooooohhhhh, I couldn't resist a peek at LJ and I found this pleasing fic updated again. I applaud you! You know how to make my day.

Seiran doesn't have to worry about future heirs running the country. All he has to do is wait for Ryuuki and Shuurei to grow up, marry them over, and let them take care of the empire while he settles into early retirement. Better yet if his kawaaii siblings have children. Uncle Seiran only needs to gloat in happiness.

I absolutely adore how you portray Shuurei. So far, it's the most accurate in fics. Keep up the good work.

Date: 2007-03-09 01:43 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sparrow-wings.livejournal.com
*happy sigh* I love Shuurei, she's so active. The last two lines are just perfect. (And, like everyone else, I like the consideration she shows for the books.)

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