Saiunkoku: The Age of Silver: Dragon's Whisker

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Dragon's Whisker

Civil war erupts, and Seien returns. Drama with Angst, I-4

There were screams in the roar of voices, now, and Shuurei flinched from the sound, drawing closer against Seiran, looking up at them both with wide eyes. "Is it..." she had to stop and swallow, "is it really going to be all right?"

Comments

[visenya.livejournal.com]

While the conversation between Seiran and the emperor was very well done, I think it was the last scene that touched me most. To see him break down like that...poor Seiran. Also, poison cup imagery works wonderfully.

[branchandroot]

Thank you, I hoped that last bit would show the extent of how wrought up by it all Seiran is. *pleased*