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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2006-12-13 04:23 pm

FMA: Tamashii: Compression

Fic post from my archive.

Compression

Back with his teacher again, Al takes up his studies; this time, though, he already knows some things won't work. Drama, I-3.

He dreamed of the color, sometimes, nights when he woke up sweating and threw open the window just to look up at the sky and know the whole world wasn't red.

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[identity profile] written-in-blue.livejournal.com 2006-12-13 09:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Ouch. Ouch ouch ouch, poor Al. *pets him*

He gets more like Ed every day, doesn't he?

[identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com 2006-12-13 10:09 pm (UTC)(link)
wouldn't he try to revert to the old status quo but be mostly unsuccessful since he's changed apart from Ed?
Believing -- and having some small port to host that belief -- that his brother's really still alive somewhere is only going to push him harder to find a way to semi-safely, at least, bridge the gap and try to bring him home, I'd think.

[identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com 2006-12-14 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
A--wha-?! [blinksblinksblinks] You know, that's one thing I actually hadn't expected. Ed, yeah, I guess I could see going either or both ways. [shrugs] But Al... it never even crossed my mind....

[wicked little grin] Oh, now this *should* be fun!

[identity profile] grass-angel.livejournal.com 2006-12-15 03:01 am (UTC)(link)
Awww.. I feel so sorry for Al.

[identity profile] lmsfan.livejournal.com 2006-12-15 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
i like this piece very much. the sentiments and the characters are well portrayed. :)