[Fic] Better than Dessert

[branchandroot]

Cross-post from my archive.

Fandom/Arc: Standalone, Yami no Matsuei
Characters/Pairings: Hisoka/Tsuzuki, Kurosaki Hisoka, Tsuzuki Asato
Summary: Pure smut. Written for Porn Battle, with the prompt: Tsuzuki/Hisoka, Hisoka on top.
Meta: Porn Without Plot, I-3
Wordcount: 328

"You sound like you're asking for dessert," Hisoka teased, husky and deadpan.

"You're better than dessert," Tsuzuki assured him, moaning.

Read: Better than Dessert

Comments

[aishuu.livejournal.com]

*smiles* I've been working with Yue for several years now, and what really fascinates me is his relationship with Yukito. I'm of the opinion that Yue created Yukito as his "ideal," everything he wants to be but can't openly. If you look at Yue from that perspective, it says quite a lot.

Yue wants to be loved. I think that's the key thing - he wants to love and be loved, and he cares deeply for those around him. If we look at Yukito's fear of disappearing, yet reluctance to tell Touya the truth (which Yue implies right before the power transfer) we can see that Yue values others far above himself. He's actually on the line of masochism, since he wallows so splendidly.

I do like what you said about Yue's heightened sense of emotional awareness and comparing it to sex. It seems very realistic to me.

and i utterly blame you for kick-starting me on my yue backstory fic.

[branchandroot]

*snickering* That's the kind of blame it's fun to take.

I'm still poking at how much Yue and Yukito's relationship will be explicit and how much it will be the shadow of all the stories. They're amazingly private characters, even when they're finally, /finally/ given me actual stories.

[aishuu.livejournal.com]

*laughs* I tend to see them from outside narrators (Yuuko, Nakuru, Touya...) - I don't think I've ever done something directly from their perspective. Of course, one of the main things a CCS writer needs to decide is what the Yue/Yukito dynamics are. I will say nothing irritates me more than someone deciding to "magically separate" the two.

you may not be so eager when you see the end result