[Fic] Better than Dessert
Apr. 11th, 2008 03:16 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Cross-post from my archive.
Fandom/Arc: Standalone, Yami no Matsuei
Characters/Pairings: Hisoka/Tsuzuki, Kurosaki Hisoka, Tsuzuki Asato
Summary: Pure smut. Written for Porn Battle, with the prompt: Tsuzuki/Hisoka, Hisoka on top.
Meta: Porn Without Plot, I-3
Wordcount: 328
"You sound like you're asking for dessert," Hisoka teased, husky and deadpan.
"You're better than dessert," Tsuzuki assured him, moaning.
Read: Better than Dessert
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Date: 2007-04-13 09:16 pm (UTC)Yue wants to be loved. I think that's the key thing - he wants to love and be loved, and he cares deeply for those around him. If we look at Yukito's fear of disappearing, yet reluctance to tell Touya the truth (which Yue implies right before the power transfer) we can see that Yue values others far above himself. He's actually on the line of masochism, since he wallows so splendidly.
I do like what you said about Yue's heightened sense of emotional awareness and comparing it to sex. It seems very realistic to me.
and i utterly blame you for kick-starting me on my yue backstory fic.no subject
Date: 2007-04-13 09:35 pm (UTC)I'm still poking at how much Yue and Yukito's relationship will be explicit and how much it will be the shadow of all the stories. They're amazingly private characters, even when they're finally, /finally/ given me actual stories.
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Date: 2007-04-13 09:49 pm (UTC)you may not be so eager when you see the end result