Translated
May. 31st, 2006 07:23 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
branchandrootYou know... it's possible I was destined to write cheesy samurai stories.
This is just really a lot of fun.
*pokes at the upcoming battle with Fudoumine* Yeah. I think what Tezuka needs to notice is that someone so confident can be so desperately determined. And also the total refusal to rely on anyone else in any way, since the issue of amai is going to be pivotal later.
*considers* Perhaps include the moment with Kaidou. Possibly even including that Inui instigates it to jar Kaidou out of his own no-reliance mode. And it has knock-on effects.
Incidentally, I love the tension in the use of amai in tenipuri. It's what makes good doubles, and good senpai-kouhai. But it's also the demi-insult you yell at an opponent who's just given you an opening to do something nasty to them. As if to remind them that you're an enemy--to re-establish proper in group and out group boundaries.
This is just really a lot of fun.
*pokes at the upcoming battle with Fudoumine* Yeah. I think what Tezuka needs to notice is that someone so confident can be so desperately determined. And also the total refusal to rely on anyone else in any way, since the issue of amai is going to be pivotal later.
*considers* Perhaps include the moment with Kaidou. Possibly even including that Inui instigates it to jar Kaidou out of his own no-reliance mode. And it has knock-on effects.
Incidentally, I love the tension in the use of amai in tenipuri. It's what makes good doubles, and good senpai-kouhai. But it's also the demi-insult you yell at an opponent who's just given you an opening to do something nasty to them. As if to remind them that you're an enemy--to re-establish proper in group and out group boundaries.
