PoT: Yaru: Yaru, Epilogue
Sep. 26th, 2004 03:22 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Fic post from my archive.
Tezuka and Echizen settle in with each other.
"But, really! I never thought, in a hundred years, Echizen would actually catch him..."
Fic post from my archive.
Tezuka and Echizen settle in with each other.
"But, really! I never thought, in a hundred years, Echizen would actually catch him..."
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Date: 2004-09-26 08:25 pm (UTC)So very happy. Yesh. Fuji with the clue trout, and vastly-amused Yukimura! ^_________________________^
You've made me verra happy. ^__^
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Date: 2004-09-27 12:39 am (UTC)Happiness is good! Happiness is a warm Ryouma. *has Beatles flashbacks from childhood*
Remind me not to write replies when I'm a bit drunk, darling. *kisskiss*
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Date: 2004-09-26 08:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-27 12:41 am (UTC)*pets Fuji*
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Date: 2004-09-27 02:56 am (UTC)You are wonderful! *huggles*
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Date: 2004-09-28 03:08 am (UTC)Fuji still won't say how much he intended to happen, but whichever way I bet he had a ball watching it happen. *pets Fuji*
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Date: 2004-09-27 04:23 am (UTC)But there are exceptions.
Your writing is so freakingly gorgeous, so vivid, that I had to keep from making pathetic noises each time there was a particularly delicious bit of dialogue between the two.
Which comes to a part on characterization: damn woman, you made things WORK. And that's rare in a fandom so crackified such as this. I guess my apathy to Tezuka comes from the fact that the animators and Konomi don't really try to define him all the more (aka: given the personality of a cardboard box) but you defined him in such a way that allowed for developement that was both believable and enjoyable.
;____; Woman. You are teh *LOVE*.
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Date: 2004-09-28 03:12 am (UTC)Characterization is what I focus most on, and it's always good to hear when it rings true to readers. (I love crackfic, too, but I can't write it to save my life. ^_^; ) Tezuka, especially, is fun to play with, because Konomi tosses off a few little hints of personality, and then just goes off and leaves Tezuka swinging in the wind of his own perfection. Poor guy. *pets Tezuka*
^_^
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Date: 2004-09-27 12:41 pm (UTC)I've enjoyed this storyline so much, especially watching Tezuka and Ryoma's slow, gentle and almost inevitable movement towards each other. I've also enjoyed the way certain other people have given helpful nudges along the way (the comment in the first part about "someone had told him Tezuka liked to come here and when he found out it was Fuji..." had me howling with laughter).
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Date: 2004-09-28 03:15 am (UTC)*grins* Ah, Tezuka knows Fuji.
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Date: 2004-09-27 04:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-28 03:15 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-09-28 03:28 am (UTC)You did a very, very good job with this. ♥
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Date: 2004-09-28 03:50 pm (UTC)