PoT: Yaru: Motto

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Fic post from my archive.

Motto

Ryouma drags Tezuka off for an unofficial match. Drama, I-3

When the doorbell rang, Kunimitsu knew exactly who it was. He couldn't have said how he knew, because he categorically refused to believe that an inanimate object such as a doorbell was capable of ringing in a cocky tone just because of who was pressing it. But the information got through somehow.

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he categorically refused to believe than an inanimate object such as a doorbell was capable of ringing in a cocky tone

This line is great.

Er, "than" should be "that", right?

I like the interaction between Ryouma and Tezuka. Finally! We get more introspection from Tezuka than the 'become the pillar of tennis, Echizen!'

[branchandroot]

Whoops! Yes, it should, thank you. Twice. ^_-

I love trying to fill in what Tezuka might be thinking behind that poker face. And he does go to such trouble over Ryouma, it must be something...

Good to hear you liked it!