PoT: Mirror Writing: Fence

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Fence

A typical day in the life of Ryouma and Momo, with a few extra revelations on Momo's part. Karupin gets in on the action. Drama With Getting-There Romance, I-4

That furball was the only living creature he had ever seen Ryouma look at with open tenderness, and Momo had a good idea of who would lose if it came to a choice between the cat and himself.

Comments

[risingtides.livejournal.com]

It's the little differences that elevate a writer to "good" in my mind. It's when someone takes the time to check on something, research a small nitpick that makes me *shimmer*. The social changes are very interesting - I think Oishi might actually be in the hardest position, socially - though Tezuka's is intriguing. Hell, Momoshiro's and Ryoma's in this verse as well.

Momo doesn't talk to me. Surprisingly, my narrators are Tezuka and Oishi... and I don't really like Oishi that much. But it's easier sometimes to show the characters you LOVE from a perspective outside, no? I like TesuRyo, but I really think there's something paternal in it, almost.

Ahhh.... *pouts* And I was all ready to fight!!! *shows kitty fangs&