PoT: Challenge: Circle

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Circle

The long awaited last match of Nationals. Drama, I-4

Seiichi's smile changed, undiluted pleasure added to the satisfaction. It was the last round of Nationals, and they were ready.

Comments

[aishuu.livejournal.com]

No, I'm not going to kill you, but I do want more... which is exactly where it should be. Always leave the audience begging, ne?

The ending was perfect - the unknown resolution that leaves the reader to decide who won. Personally, my bet is Tezuka... he's the main Mary Sue, after all.

I would like to see more Rikkai from you.

[branchandroot]

*nods* This was one of those times I couldn't quite decide, for myself, who 'should' win. Ending it definitively, either way, didn't quite feel right.

*snickers* Mary Sue v The Damsel in Distress! Oh, god.

I'm pretty sure there will be more. Kirihara needs to deal with being captain. And he's already found himself a congenial coach, too; resourceful boy. I expect I'll peck at that after the MomoRyo branch.

[risingtides.livejournal.com]

*grasps at more Kiri fic*

I have such a hard time writing him, for serious fics. I always end up throwing him into crack verses.