PoT: Challenge: Nutshell

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Nutshell

Takes place during Chapter Seven. Introspective. Yukimura tries to deal with his debilitation over the winter. Angst, I-5

He tried to sleep as much as possible.

Comments

[naanima.livejournal.com]

There was just something so beautiful about Yukimura's description of -his- team. And by god, it's his team. He knows them like he knows the back of his own hands. There's just something... something... wow about this piece.

[branchandroot]

*nods* I was trying to emphasize that disjuncture, between the bright, active things he knows so wonderfully well, and this horrible, flat place he's stuck. *shudders* It's really no wonder most people who contract that syndrome need psychological therapy as badly as they need physical therapy, after.

[naanima.livejournal.com]

And you have done it well. Just thinking about all of your muscles, your body betraying you that way *shudders* It's even worse for Yukimura who (for lack of a better work) is a control freak, and an active tennis player. Poor Yukimura *snuggles*