PoT: Challenge: Cloud to Cloud

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Cloud to Cloud

Immediately following "The Continuation of War", Kirihara finds himself somewhat disturbed by the day's experiences, and Yukimura offers him reassurance. Porn with Insights, I-4

The lurch as the bus stopped woke Akaya from a half dozing dream that promptly escaped him. All he remembered was that it had involved cutting a tall chain-link fence. And that Fuji had been mixed up in the project. There were really days Akaya wished his subconscious could just send him a memo.

Comments

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

Hum....I think it was a little too slow. I love Yukimura, but sometimes he is too gentle to my personal taste.
Of course I liked this fic, specially because I was waiting for some intercourse between Yukimura and Kirihara for a long time, but...I don't know. "I" prefer something more rough, more violent. The problem is that it's almost impossible with Yukimura, because he's damn manipulative (oh, yeah, I think 'god' was a good description to him), but extremely calm and have a self control out of the ordinary.

But what really matter is that you wrote this piece and I enjoyed as always ^_^

[branchandroot]

Any combination of characters has their own pace. While I can easily see Yukimura being somewhat overwhelming to a lover, I have a hard time seeing him being rough about it. That's what the SanaKiri is for. *winks*

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

Yeah, yeah, I know. It's hard to see Yukimura being rough, specially with someone like Kirihara. But someway I think he's a terrific lover, ne?