PoT: Challenge: Cloud to Cloud

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Cloud to Cloud

Immediately following "The Continuation of War", Kirihara finds himself somewhat disturbed by the day's experiences, and Yukimura offers him reassurance. Porn with Insights, I-4

The lurch as the bus stopped woke Akaya from a half dozing dream that promptly escaped him. All he remembered was that it had involved cutting a tall chain-link fence. And that Fuji had been mixed up in the project. There were really days Akaya wished his subconscious could just send him a memo.

Comments

[soloproject.livejournal.com]

I, for the life of my, was flailing when I read in your LJ something about YUKIKIRI and spent an entire day bumbling around trying to imagine it.

It's Porn with Insight. In stupid person talk, you are GENIUS. *___*

So long as you don't go into the YUKIRYO thing. No bunnies there! >.> *stabs at possible YUKIRYO bunnies*

[lechaco.livejournal.com]

ahhhh *flails and fangirls* YukiKiri!!! I was lusting after YukiKiri for a while. XDXDXD all your smutfics are so erotic *____* <333!! It's Everyone Loves Seiichi again *_* <33 though I like to see Akaya's fixation with Yukimura as the Oedipus' Complex...*coughs* :D;;;

I really liked how you drew a parallel between the storm and Yukimura. Wonderful imagery and descriptions.

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

[wicked]You know, Akaya needs to bag Yanagi now, so he can have the complete set.[/wicked]

[flowright.livejournal.com]

*refreshing the page every other minute*

yes another fic ! (it's 2am here and I don't go to sleep before reading the last part of the challenge arc)

So Akaya knows now what it's like to have sex with a god... (their love is so greek myths !)

I second lechaco AtoYuki would be delightful !

[anruik]

God, you do spoil us so~ *squees, snugs, offers a neat box of truffles* ... And of course, one for the bunnies... *tosses a few truffles in their general direction*

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

Mmm... this was just beautiful. {huffs} how dare you write such beautiful smut! And I hesitate to even use the word 'smut' here, because this was just too wonderfully well-written...

^.^ I'm a whore for rainstorms, though, so, as if you didn't already have me wrapped around your fingers---I adored this.

The different facets of Akaya's personalitied were reflected perfectly in the roles he plays for Sanada vs. Yukimura, and, and...

{sighs} Sorry, I'm not being more specific... I'm just a pile of feel-good mush right now...

(Oh! and the image of the greek gods? Love the idea! Oooh... and Atobe and Yukimura? in the same room? Hello, sparks! It would do Sanada some good to get jealous again! I look forward to seeing these boys in high school and other settings, too!)

[naanima.livejournal.com]

"you give yourself to me so easily."
"You take me so completely,"

That pretty much sum up their whole relationship ^_^ Love your Porn with Insights! LOVE! And this piece is particularly gorgeous. Your fics containing rain and storms often touch me the most. Gods, love you and oyur talent *huggles*

[avamaria.livejournal.com]

How you manage to write porn that's more character-revealing than a character revelation fic is beyond me. ♥ ♥ ♥ Your use of rain and the storm (especially when Akaya cannot tell what is Yukimura's touch and what is the wind) I found gave such a wonderful sense to it. I love your Yukimura, he's so gentle and yet so sure.

AtoYuki! *flails* With manipulative!Yuki, which is the best kind. I can't wait to read, myself and lechaco are obsessed with AtoYuki. XD

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

Hum....I think it was a little too slow. I love Yukimura, but sometimes he is too gentle to my personal taste.
Of course I liked this fic, specially because I was waiting for some intercourse between Yukimura and Kirihara for a long time, but...I don't know. "I" prefer something more rough, more violent. The problem is that it's almost impossible with Yukimura, because he's damn manipulative (oh, yeah, I think 'god' was a good description to him), but extremely calm and have a self control out of the ordinary.

But what really matter is that you wrote this piece and I enjoyed as always ^_^

[issen4.livejournal.com]

I love this very much. And Yukimura, definitely god-like... god of seme, maybe?

It's interesting that you use the name 'Yukimura-san' (family name) and 'Akaya' (personal name) throughout; emphasizes who is in control.

[aishuu.livejournal.com]

Hmmm...

I'm wonderimg if you're taking this arc somewhere? I still want to see this as Yukimura/Tezuka (and I blame you for making me WRITE a Yukimura/Tezuka piece).

I think Kirihara has softened a bit through these series of smut ficlets. It's interesting, and the writing is still excellent, but I'm curious now where this is going. IE - Are you doing your own version of the championship? Because damn girl, I want to see.

The only Kiri pairing you've missed is my favorite for Rikkai - him with Yanagi... but I don't think this fits in this verse. *looks thoughtful* They don't seem to have a particularly close connection.