branchandroot | PoT: Challenge: Cloud to Cloud

I, for the life of my, was flailing when I read in your LJ something about YUKIKIRI and spent an entire day bumbling around trying to imagine it.

It's Porn with Insight. In stupid person talk, you are GENIUS. *___*

So long as you don't go into the YUKIRYO thing. No bunnies there! >.> *stabs at possible YUKIRYO bunnies*

*snuggles* Thank you, darling!

Re YukiRyo: In the words of Sei-chan, definitely not.

ahhhh *flails and fangirls* YukiKiri!!! I was lusting after YukiKiri for a while. XDXDXD all your smutfics are so erotic *____* <333!! It's Everyone Loves Seiichi again *_* <33 though I like to see Akaya's fixation with Yukimura as the Oedipus' Complex...*coughs* :D;;;

I really liked how you drew a parallel between the storm and Yukimura. Wonderful imagery and descriptions.

Of course everybody loves Seiichi, Seiichi is a god; 'Haru-chan even said so. *nodnod*

It wasn't too overdone, then? Oh, good! I was a little iffy about that. Even if I did have to forcibly stop myself from dragging in dragon myths... ^_^;

Yeah, Sei-chan is, um, having some fun with Atobe. I can't, for the life of me, tell who's manipulating who, here. Probably both.

I completely agree with the both part. I see Atobe taking a liking to Yukimura like a little boy to a new toy that he would eventually tire of. But I also see Yukimura as a Siren who lures Atobe to him. >:D!!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

[wicked]You know, Akaya needs to bag Yanagi now, so he can have the complete set.[/wicked]

You're always wicked, darling, that's why we love you.

So far, Yanagi is holding out. They may have coffee at some point, though.

pictures Niou turning to Renji and asking, "So are you gonna bang the kid, too?"

*refreshing the page every other minute*

yes another fic ! (it's 2am here and I don't go to sleep before reading the last part of the challenge arc)

So Akaya knows now what it's like to have sex with a god... (their love is so greek myths !)

I second

lechaco AtoYuki would be delightful !

*flattered*

*laughing over the greek myth thing*

Ah, but it's Kiri-elf's job to tease Sanada, I wouldn't want to take it way from him. ^_-

*Kirihara smiles, as-if modestly*

I think the AtoYuki bunny has won the wrestling match with the Sanada/Yanagi bunny, though.

kudos to the AtoYuki Bunny !

they look cute and everything but I suspect them to be from the family of the killer bunny of the Holy Grail fame, they could beat the others bunnies any times.

I never ask afraid of the answer but Have you a precise idea about when you will feel that you have mo more to say about rikkai ? I dread that moment....

*counts bunnies* Let's see, there's the Sanada/Yanagi, Sanada's Research Excursion, the Yuki v Tezu match at Nationals. Those for sure. I also find myself deeply tempted to write grown-up-Troika fic of indeterminate shape. I do want to get back around to my languishing MomoRyo branch at some point, but I now suspect that this will merely be the preface to including Rikkai in the Mirror Writing arc, too.

I guess all that translates to: not soon.

relieved sigh

For now, I'm very happy without your MomoRyo fic ^_^

I think the AtoYuki bunny has won the wrestling match with the Sanada/Yanagi bunny, though.

Even thought Atobe is one of my favorite characters, I really didn't like this notice...

God, you do spoil us so~ *squees, snugs, offers a neat box of truffles* ... And of course, one for the bunnies... *tosses a few truffles in their general direction*

*pounces on truffles* Oooo! *snugsback*

*bunnies catch truffles and start bouncing faster*

Hey, if I can procrastinate on my real work and make people happy, it's all good. ^_^V

Mmm... this was just beautiful. {huffs} how dare you write such beautiful smut! And I hesitate to even use the word 'smut' here, because this was just too wonderfully well-written...

^.^ I'm a whore for rainstorms, though, so, as if you didn't already have me wrapped around your fingers---I adored this.

The different facets of Akaya's personalitied were reflected perfectly in the roles he plays for Sanada vs. Yukimura, and, and...

{sighs} Sorry, I'm not being more specific... I'm just a pile of feel-good mush right now...

(Oh! and the image of the greek gods? Love the idea! Oooh... and Atobe and Yukimura? in the same room? Hello, sparks! It would do Sanada some good to get jealous again! I look forward to seeing these boys in high school and other settings, too!)

Yes, RainSluts unite! *high fives*

Mush is good. Mush is very complimentary. ^_^

Yep, yep! In the same garden, even, where the light will be just right for a little spot of undraped modelling. *tiny grin* Atobe thinks Sanada will be jealous, too, but Sanada doesn't get a part in this one.

{returns high five happily} Yep; I've got one for Yuushi and Gakuto half-written from a couple of weeks ago. Gonna get cracking on it again. ^.^

Mush is... {grins} a great feeling sometimes ^.^ :-p

This... Atobe thread of yours sounds mighty interesting. Looking forward to it.

"you give yourself to me so easily."
"You take me so completely,"

That pretty much sum up their whole relationship ^_^ Love your Porn with Insights! LOVE! And this piece is particularly gorgeous. Your fics containing rain and storms often touch me the most. Gods, love you and oyur talent *huggles*

*happy* *lovesback*

Those were the lines that the whole story really built itself around. Well, that and the storm, since I am deeply in love with storms, and always manage to find at least one character to speak that for me.

*pets Kiri-elf* There, don't you feel loved and privileged?

Kirihara: Depends. Are you still planning to write that story about Sanada-san 'teaching me a lesson'?

Emily: Oh! Thank you so much for reminding me, dear!

Kirihara: ...oops.

Storms and emotions seem to be a major theme for you (and how I adore them!!).

Kirihara: Depends. Are you still planning to write that story about Sanada-san 'teaching me a lesson'?

*cat ears perks up* Oh, reeeeeeally? What sort of lesson? *lecherous grin*

Oh, one about the consequences of teasing. *wicked grin*

How you manage to write porn that's more character-revealing than a character revelation fic is beyond me. ♥ ♥ ♥ Your use of rain and the storm (especially when Akaya cannot tell what is Yukimura's touch and what is the wind) I found gave such a wonderful sense to it. I love your Yukimura, he's so gentle and yet so sure.

AtoYuki! *flails* With manipulative!Yuki, which is the best kind. I can't wait to read, myself and

lechaco are obsessed with AtoYuki. XD

Thank you!

(Definitely the best kind. And Atobe walks right into it with open eyes, which kind of surprised me. Half the time I don't know what these boys will do next.)

Hum....I think it was a little too slow. I love Yukimura, but sometimes he is too gentle to my personal taste.
Of course I liked this fic, specially because I was waiting for some intercourse between Yukimura and Kirihara for a long time, but...I don't know. "I" prefer something more rough, more violent. The problem is that it's almost impossible with Yukimura, because he's damn manipulative (oh, yeah, I think 'god' was a good description to him), but extremely calm and have a self control out of the ordinary.

But what really matter is that you wrote this piece and I enjoyed as always ^_^

Any combination of characters has their own pace. While I can easily see Yukimura being somewhat overwhelming to a lover, I have a hard time seeing him being rough about it. That's what the SanaKiri is for. *winks*

Yeah, yeah, I know. It's hard to see Yukimura being rough, specially with someone like Kirihara. But someway I think he's a terrific lover, ne?

I love this very much. And Yukimura, definitely god-like... god of seme, maybe?

It's interesting that you use the name 'Yukimura-san' (family name) and 'Akaya' (personal name) throughout; emphasizes who is in control.

Good to hear! *snerks* Well, I think he would certainly qualify for that.

*nods* One of the things that makes me read Kirihara as the baby of Rikkai is that all of his teammates use his given name, and he, very properly for such a demon-child, uses familyname-senpai for all of them. And, while I can see him becoming at least a little more informal with Sanada, and dropping the title, I doubt he would ever do that with his captain. Not in this arc, anyway. *sparkles because someone noticed*

Hmmm...

I'm wonderimg if you're taking this arc somewhere? I still want to see this as Yukimura/Tezuka (and I blame you for making me WRITE a Yukimura/Tezuka piece).

I think Kirihara has softened a bit through these series of smut ficlets. It's interesting, and the writing is still excellent, but I'm curious now where this is going. IE - Are you doing your own version of the championship? Because damn girl, I want to see.

The only Kiri pairing you've missed is my favorite for Rikkai - him with Yanagi... but I don't think this fits in this verse. *looks thoughtful* They don't seem to have a particularly close connection.

Kinda yes and no both; I usually have a vague idea of where my arcs are headed, but how they get there often surprises me. I do want to at least get to the Yuki V Tezu match to close out Nationals... though I expect mobs with pitchforks to come after me for the way I intend to end it. And that will be the end of the Challenge arc. There are a few more back-and-fill stories to fit in, of course. The thing is, I'm also very tempted to go on with a Kiri-centric arc tracking how he develops next year, when Rikkai is his. Because I don't think there will be any other captain he respects, and what happens then?

That arc, actually, is where there might be Yuki/Tezu, because that's when Yukimura might find himself in need of some of Tezuka's hands-off management methods.

So, yeah, you'll get to see. But the team stories are exhausting to write, and I need to soothe my nerves with smutlets in between while I get my wind back. ^_-

*chin in hand* You know, it's weird. I like to read YanaKiri, but I just can't bring that pair together in my head to write it. I do want to do some gen interaction fic for them, but I keep grinding the gears when I try to shift it to romance.

(and I blame you for making me WRITE a Yukimura/Tezuka piece).

*smug grin*

If you do a Kiri arc, I will... well, not be a slave, but a devoted fangirl. He's my current favorite...

I've thought of the matter myself, but from Echizen's standpoint. Next year is gonna be a wash, and the year after? Scary.

Yukimura strikes me as someone who instinctively is perfect at handling interpersonal relationships, so him needing Tezuka hurts my head. Tezuka is awkward, to me. Then again, my Tezuka tends toward antisocial.

*shimmers brilliantly* I'm glad you have further plans, sa!

*thwaps for smug grin*

*bounces* Well, see, it could be so cool, the thing is... *gets control of self again* Ok. Not babbling. The thing is, I see Tezuka and Yukimura coming at people-handling from different ends of the spectrum. Tezuka is... afraid, I think, to be too open, to let his people too close, because if he let go around his team he'd mow them down, and resentment rears its ugly head. So he leads by distant example. At least, that's the reasoning I impute to him. Yukimura, I speculate, leads his personal clutch of psychos precisely by letting go around them, by showing them clearly what he can do and by being pretty open to them; the openness counterbalances any intimidation factor, and it all works out. But if he's not right there, if he's placed at some distance to Kirihara, and isn't his official captain anymore, I'm not sure that openness will be as strong. It will have lost its framework. He'll be forced to lead from a distance, if he still wants to guide Kiri-elf at all, and the best example around of that technique would be Tezuka.

Ok, stopping enthusing, now.

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