PoT: Challenge: Cloud to Cloud

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Cloud to Cloud

Immediately following "The Continuation of War", Kirihara finds himself somewhat disturbed by the day's experiences, and Yukimura offers him reassurance. Porn with Insights, I-4

The lurch as the bus stopped woke Akaya from a half dozing dream that promptly escaped him. All he remembered was that it had involved cutting a tall chain-link fence. And that Fuji had been mixed up in the project. There were really days Akaya wished his subconscious could just send him a memo.

Comments

[avamaria.livejournal.com]

How you manage to write porn that's more character-revealing than a character revelation fic is beyond me. ♥ ♥ ♥ Your use of rain and the storm (especially when Akaya cannot tell what is Yukimura's touch and what is the wind) I found gave such a wonderful sense to it. I love your Yukimura, he's so gentle and yet so sure.

AtoYuki! *flails* With manipulative!Yuki, which is the best kind. I can't wait to read, myself and lechaco are obsessed with AtoYuki. XD

[branchandroot]

Thank you!

(Definitely the best kind. And Atobe walks right into it with open eyes, which kind of surprised me. Half the time I don't know what these boys will do next.)