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PoT: Challenge: Credit

Fic post from my archive.

This story takes place in a quantum bubble of the Challengeverse (maybe it happened, maybe it didn't), immediately following "The Continuation of War". Tezuka offers Oishi some support after his very bad day. Porn with Characterization, I-3

It had not been a relaxing day for Oishi Shuichirou.

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You spoil us, you know *amused, snugs* Not that we mind, of course~ *innocent*

Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

Is there anything you write that won't turn me into Em-goo? No? I thought not.

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Tezuka/Oishi porn.

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*fans self*

More?

*dump truck after truck of truffles*

No...why? WHY? Now I WON'T EVER GET USED TO THE IDEA OF TEZUKA BEING WITH ANYONE ELSE! AUGH!

It really doesn't get better than this...except um...*cough* YanaInui and...*hack* ♥ I've missed this pair, really, I have. \(^o^)/

wonderful once again even if I don't ship this pairing. XD; very erotic :B

{blinksblinks}

Omake... means... parody, ne?

Don't get me wrong... it was--is--a good story... but... but... {spurtters} It's OISHI! and TEZUKA! WTF!!! {wails and pulls at hair}

My brain... can't... compute....

Other than that minor user-problem...

Really did like way you described the relationship between captain and vice captain... and between these two friends. How they can support each other with Oishi's openness and Tezuka's seemingly unending strength...

(and then my brain fried when they started kissing >.< )

A convincing Tezuka and Oishi, that is. I guess it's because it's all Golden Pair, Golden Pair, and occasionally I get the crazy (heretical?) thought maybe they aren't married; after all, Eiji didn't even know that Oishi was a bowling enthusiast in the bowling episode. But there's so much GP--and some of it is lovely so I treat all of it as AU.

Ahem, to get back to the point. I love your Oishi. It's nice to know that he's not some super-patient, long-suffering Japanese boy who gets stamped with the 'mother' label. Well, not one who doesn't get any sex, anyway. Especially sex with Tezuka-with-personality.

Oh, my God! I. LOVE. YOU! I really, really love. You don't have any idea how happy you made me.
I simple LOVE Tezuka and Oishi together. They are the best pair in my opinion. I love, love, love them. And it's so rare to find any fic with them together. Everybody always write Tezuka with Fuji and...well, that's not a pair that I like. And Tezuka/Oishi is a rarity and you as always were perfect. So, I love you even more now for doing it.

Thank you, thank you, thank you so much.

And I know I didn't do any sense in this comment, but...that's because I'm too happy to be real ^_^

*** PS: I'm definetly not used to listen Oishi being called Shuichirou...

very few people gave Tezuka attitude for long once they had played against him. Well, very few people, aside from Echizen, who gave absolutely everybody attitude, and could actually be considered becomingly respectful, by comparison, for moderating the back talk he gave his captain.

{laughing} you know... this reminds me of what Aishuu and I were talking about with Echizen and his maturity--or lack there of--and how his attitude towards respect is very much one of a more American upbringing.

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it had been the crack about Niou's own captain that had been the last straw

This is such a telling observation about Oishi's character. Where Yukimura would have laughed it off and/or played into Niou's teasing, Oishi took offense for him... or maybe I'm reading this wrong?

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sspp... I noticed this 'cause of someone else's comment, but, the third paragraph---"Oishi's teeth were grinding"...

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mmmm... Tezuka's hands... massage.... damn, I bet that feels good....

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I don't know... maybe I'm a liar, and I really can't read most pairings... but this.. still didn't sit right with me. Not so much with it being Tezuka and Oishi, but... but with it being Tezuka. Tezuka seemed off to me. I haven't placed my finger on it yet, but when I do...

:-/ Perplexed.

You made my day with this fic.
Tezuka x Oishi is so raaaaare and it was so well described, and Oishi's pov is just perfect and
*o* that I can't be constructive. I love this pairing so much and your fic was marvelous, so thank you !!

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Whatwhatwhat?! *sparkles*

Ohmigosh! What a totally unexpected and utterly delightful little surprise! Imagine that; Ooishi and Tezuka. Intimate. Together. Love this -- absolutely adore it! *_*

(Tinyminimal unimportant nitpick: The heat wound it's way into his bones... There's an its/it's error in there. <:) )

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