PoT: Challenge: Credit

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Credit

This story takes place in a quantum bubble of the Challengeverse (maybe it happened, maybe it didn't), immediately following "The Continuation of War". Tezuka offers Oishi some support after his very bad day. Porn with Characterization, I-3

It had not been a relaxing day for Oishi Shuichirou.

Comments

[branchandroot]

but, the third paragraph---"Oishi's teeth were grinding"...

*facepalm* Oops. Thank you.

Hm. If you do pin it down, let me know. I know I do take advantage of the fact that you can ascribe just about any emotion to Tezuka in private; I may have taken it too far in this one. Maybe the implied history needs to be fleshed out more to support their interaction?

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

yeah, I figured you'd want to know about that--I honestly didn't notice it the first couple of times, I'm so used to switching back and forth in my own narratives. ^.^;;

Hmmm... good point. You're right. that's it. Tezuka just seems too... emotionally *open* all of a sudden...

{happyily} well, that solves that mystery! Now, when's the next part???