PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Ten

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Ten

The team brings the results to their captain. Drama, I-3

"Is it over, do you think?" Yagyuu asked, at last, barely whispering in the silence. He didn't protest when Masaharu twined a hand into his hair, drawing his head down to Masaharu's shoulder.

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[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

I'm running out of time, so I'll be short.
I loved all ten parts. It was the first Yagyuu/Niou fic I really, really liked, because you not fell in the mistake almost all fanfic authors fell: do them change so much that they can't be recognized anymore. (sorry, but I really think it's impossible to people who really know them not be able to say who is who...in a game I can understand an adversary don't being able, but not friends, family and things like that...that's why I like the fact that they only changed twice in this fic).

But what really matters is that I liked your fic, I liked the way you portraited Rikkai Dai, I loved Sanada...and Yukimura...and Yanagi too, and...well, I'll read the next fic ^_^

Just a question (because I read the manga too long ago): who has the light hair and the dark hair? (about Yagyuu and Niou, of course).

[branchandroot]

*complimented* You have to figure, if no one else noticed, Yanagi would almost have to. I mean, it's practically his job description.

^_^V

*thinks* Yagyuu has dark hair and Niou has light. And they get their regular hair colors back with little more than the swipe of a towel, after the match, hence my speculation about high-ticket make-up chemicals.