PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Seven

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Seven

Disaster strikes for the whole team. Drama with Angst, I-4

After such a golden autumn, no one expected what happened in the heart of winter.

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3... parts.... {swoons}

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

ooooh... you *have* been a busy ficcie author, haven't you? {leers and digs in}

Oh man, oh man, oh man, oh *man*! they way you write these boys is just drop dead *gorgeous*---{grins} and I loved the remark about the therapist having Yuki's number and being psychic!


I love the relationship you're building (have built) between all of them, but especially so the doubles (well, I guess they should really be called 'quads', ne?); how all four of them make the decision together, even if Yagyuu speaks first, and---and---and---!!!

It's all so great! {glomps before tackling the next part}

Re: 3... parts.... {swoons}

[branchandroot]

*grins* Given the way canon indicates the doubles can switch around, plus the way the normal pair are so in tune, they really do strike me as a quad. *coughs* On the court, anyway...

Re: 3... parts.... {swoons}

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

{waves hand} oh, of *course* on the court... I mean, really--while the *imagines* of the four of them going at it like rabbits is *quite* drool worthy.......{looses train of thought as she pictures the boys drawing up an 'uke' schedule---"Okay, this is your week...I'll take the second week, and Yagyuu, you take the--" "What if we're not in the mood during the arranged period of time?" "Then I'm sure one of us can *get* you in the mood....or switch with ya, if that's better." "Don't worry, Jackal-baby, I'm sure I can get a...'rise' out of ya." "I don't think that's what Jackal is concerned about, Bunta." "Yeah, but please don't stop the demonstration---hn. I didn't think you could pull *that* one off..." "Mais, qui! I keep tellin' ya all: I'm a genius. Maybe *now* you'll listen to me, non?" }

{blinks} that's another thing---I need to go back and check again, but I'm pretty damn sure---am I the only one who noticed Bunta spoke *FRENCH* in the anime? Episode, oh, must have been 116 or 117 when they visited Yukimura in the hospital...

Okay, my dear. Now, you *have* to write more, because quite honestly, I've been spending too much time reading this really *awesome* fanfic writer's stuff, but she writes so realistically that I'm actually suffering self-worth issues. So, quick! Give me some drama and smexy action to recharge my sensibilities!