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This is half writing notes for the PoT Nationals rewrite that I am totally not doing. The other half is plain exasperation.

Prospective captains.


Our two second-years are Momoshiro and Kaidou. Konomi says that Kaidou is going to be tapped as the next captain. I say Konomi is full of it.

Kaidou is intensely dedicated. He'll work till he drops. He's kind of adorable. But the one thing he is not ever shown to be is outwardly focused. His focus is turned almost completely inward, on his own tennis and his own progress, only occasionally expanding for a nice fight with Momo or a partnership with Inui. He cares about his teammates, but I do not see him caring about Seigaku or about the progress of his teammates. Kaidou is a pretty classic introvert.

Momo, while he's definitely a wild card, is far more of a people person and the very first thing we see him doing is taking care of his kouhai. He helps out. He takes Echizen under his wing to socialize him and intervenes on An's behalf. He's someone who might actually be able to run a tennis club. And, while we're shown Inui paying a lot of attention to Kaidou, we're shown Tezuka, and for that matter Atobe, paying attention to Momo's game (which is why the idea that Tezuka would choose Kaidou came so out of left field, for me).

Kaidou is a sweetie, but as captain I just don't buy him. That makes even less sense than Echizen as captain; at least Echizen is shown to already have a sense of justice and education in re tennis, and a willingness to take action on it.



Kabaji is pretty much right out unless we take astonishing liberties with his characterization (which I have no intrinsic objection to, but it would only be for the shock value here). Between Hiyoshi and Ohtori... honestly I could see either of them working out, but I can also see where Atobe and Sakaki might think that Hiyoshi is better suited to survive Hyoutei's club. Hiyoshi is the explicitly ambitious one, and that would maintain the tone of the club. While I firmly believe that Ohtori has a steel core, or he wouldn't be a regular to start with, his surface is very polite and obliging. Hyoutei would probably be a somewhat different club under him, and I could see Sakaki balking at that. So this one I can see the logic of, and it could make for an interesting dynamic between Atobe and Hiyoshi.



Kirihara seems most likely, as the only second year regular. If his maturation continues along the curve started during Regionals, this could even be reasonable. I have to suspect he'd need some time to settle in and acclimate to being out from under the direct shadow of his senpai, and there's limited evidence in canon of him being instructed in management and evaluation of other players, so it would probably be a rocky spring for him and the club. But hopefully the Rikkai coaches can be tapped for help once they aren't being scared off by Yukimura, Sanada, and Yanagi (which is the only plausible explanation I've ever come up with for why Rikkai is the only school besides Fudoumine to have no sign of a coach anywhere).



Similarly, Zaizen seems like a sure bet, as the only second year in evidence. One can only hope that he'll be less abrasive to his hapless kouhai than he is to his senpai; if not, Shitenhouji may actually be weaker next year, lacking solid leadership. Given that Shiraishi seems like a reasonably perceptive fellow, I have to think that he would put in some time and effort in getting Zaizen to understand the benefits of less obvious contempt for his teammates.



Kamio seems most likely, being one of the two best players and the one who's least eccentric. (Not that I accept the fanon of Ibu being some kind of mumbling savant, but he most definitely is the one who nearly attacked another player for badmouthing Fudoumine.) This presupposes that Fudoumine will acquire enough other members to keep going next year, but a team that made it to Nationals may be expected to be a reasonably big draw, violent reputation or no. Kamio has already had a little experience in administrative stuff, as vice-captain, so he's pretty much a shoo-in.



Who the fuck knows? This is the team with a captain who was, canonically, selected by senility/accident/weirditude and then kept. It's possible they'll keep Aoi, but equally possible that it will be Amane. In any event, the one who does all the real captain work will obviously be Amane, the same way it is Saeki in canon year. For my own purposes, I'd go with Amane as official captain, also. If only because I think he's practical enough to conspire with other club members to keep unsuitable candidates out of Ojii's way next time the question comes up.



Muramochi seems likely, considering he's the one we see going along with his senpai to watch other teams and, to some extent, being instructed on and making his own judgements of other players. Hard to say what kind of captain he'll actually be, since we see very little of him all told, but I have to admit I'm tickled by the idea of Dan Taichi being, perhaps, his vice-captain.



Between Yuuta and Kaneda, I'm inclined to go with Yuuta. He has more drive, and he's the one Mizuki takes along to Nationals to watch the teams who play at that level. That said, I have to sincerely hope that Kaneda is his vice-captain, because someone will need to have a level head and Yuuta is pretty consistently shown to have a very quick temper.


One of the (very very) few things that gratifies me to see in Shin is a few of the teams actually giving some thought and preparation to handing the clubs off to the second years, because goodness knows there was no sign of it during PoT proper. It's one of the things I think made a lot of the later games so bloody boring--no sense of development or passage of time or change on the horizon, except very briefly for Hyoutei before it was rolled back.

Re: Of course you're not writing this

Date: 2012-02-24 04:37 pm (UTC)
anehan: Elizabeth Bennet with the text "sparkling". (Tenimyu: Koori no emperor)
From: [personal profile] anehan
Oh yes, Atobe and Sakaki. *sigh* I'm not really sure about it, either. It doesn't seem mentoring, really, but neither does it seem adversarial. It seems more like a mutually respectful relationship.

From the way he stood up for Shishido, Atobe doesn't seem to be afraid of challenging the system Sakaki has created when he sees a good reason to do it. And Sakaki was willing to trust Atobe's judgement. That's the most straightforward way of reading that scene, I think. At the same time, though, something about that scene rubs me the wrong way regarding Atobe's and Sakaki's interaction. So, I don't really know.

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