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PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Five

Fic post from my archive.

Niou coaxes Yagyuu into more intimacy; or perhaps it's the other way around. Drama with Porn, I-3

He reached out and, delicately, removed Yagyuu's glasses. A signal, a symbol, a talisman, but more than anything else an intense desire to see Yagyuu Hiroshi's eyes.

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{slack jawed and slightly breathless} well... hot damn! I wasn't expecting an ending like *that*!

[shakes head to clear it] welll... [clears throat] yes, then... errr... okay [blinks]

first off--ha! I love the image of the four boys discussing whether or not the triad's in 'that' kind of relationship, and how it would have to be all three, 'cause two alone simply don't hold it together (and aint that the truth)

And Kirihara's so cute! Think he has a crush on Yukimura? now *why* would I even *suggest* a thing like that...? Hmm... Oh, but the description of Sanada...and Yuki... and Kiri... Hmmm... now *that's* an interesting threesome idea... hmmm... what do you think, Bunny? dammit, I need to get a printer/scanner so you all could *see* the Rikkai puzzle... Kiri bent over with Yuki and Sanada behind him really *is* a nice image...

I truly love how all the characters are interacting, though (especially Bunta, who I just simply adore right now ^.^ It's a redhead thing, I swear), but, without a doubt... the ending scene definitely knocked me for a loop.

While generally, you know me, I like my scenes smutty and descriptive, this was just... well, a mind fuck, really. {grins} very well done, too. And I just can hardly wait for the sixth installment, however, with my meds beginning to wear off, I think it's about time for a nap for me... so...

*huge grin* And now you know why all the descriptions of Yagyuu playing were so, erm, heated. To 'Haru-chan, playing with him and going to bed with him are almost the same thing; he does it for similar reasons.

Scanners are good. *nodnod* Poor Akaya. His massive crush on Yukimura and his growing respect for Sanada are going to tie him in huge knots very shortly.

*pets* Have a good nap.

yeah... but! {sputters} I want more smex sooon! {whimpers}

{turns into a snickering grin} Poor Kiri, indeed... torn and tied and possibly gagged, ne? ^.^

Hmmm... I wonder what the chances of finding part 6 will be....

*raises brow* The next sex will be in the middle of the angst. Are you sure?

Part six will be up in just a few, after I spellcheck it. There will likely be a hiatus after that, though, since 7 will be terrible angst, and Mom is visiting Monday and Tuesday, and I don't want to leave people hanging in depression-ville. It depends on how much I get written tomorrow. We'll see.

if you can deal with me whining and complaining, I can deal with angst; and since this is Rikkai, we all mostly know you're gonna have to hit on Yukimura's illness and how that effects everyone, so it's not like the majority of your readers aren't waiting for *something* angsty... now, if/when you hit us with something angsty that *doesn't* meet expectations, I'll claim no responsibility, but really, when you think about it, angsty sex can be really good sex, too, and sex is sex and after finishing OZ yesterday I could *really* use someone *else's* sex, 'cause frankly, I think my brain's fried from writing that much smut in one piece at one time, so...

[blinks] 'hiatus'? huh? can't Mom, I don't know... respect the fact that you have people on the internet hanging off their chairs for your stories? (yeah, right... hn. [tries to picture her own mother's reactions to that] >.<) okay, well, have a good MOnday and Tuesday, and may Sunday be extremely productive for you, ne?

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