PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Five

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Five

Niou coaxes Yagyuu into more intimacy; or perhaps it's the other way around. Drama with Porn, I-3

He reached out and, delicately, removed Yagyuu's glasses. A signal, a symbol, a talisman, but more than anything else an intense desire to see Yagyuu Hiroshi's eyes.

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[naanima.livejournal.com]

meep.

I'm going to sound like I'm repeating myself. But I don't care! I love, I love, I love this! You made the Power3 OFFICIAL! *screams* The happiness I feel is not measurable by any human means. Wahhhh. I lvoe how Yagyuu is relaxing more and more, even when it isn't jsut him and Niou. See his sense of humour, fear his sense of humour *giggles*

I love the two of them, but I have admit I'm equaly enjoying the team dynamic that is abound in this piece. Marui's persinality is so fecking bright in this, Yukimura is amazing, Sanada's presence come through, and Yanagi is in the background at all times. I SQUEEEE!

And finally, Niou's obsession with fire and danger, a metaphorical pyromaniac indeed. Oh, and Yagyuu letting go of his restraints *sighs happily* And the Niou's reaction to that. The second sign of love. Niou you are so getting over your head.

LOVE! MORE!

[branchandroot]

*laughs* Just for you, dear. I was considering just Yukimura/Sanada or Yukimura/Yanagi, but then I thought, you know, Naanima's right, they just fit as a trio, and Yagyuu agreed. Not that there won't be other avenues to explore *coughSanaKiricough*

*snickers* I think they may start with the idea of switching, in the next part; over his head, indeed.

[naanima.livejournal.com]

Oh yes, and that was the other thing I forgot. I so felt the Sanada/Kirihara vibes, which you know should ahve disturbed me, except you know, it really does make sense. Mind you, in my deluded mind, I picture the Power3 being more open about their relationship than most people. As long as they realise that the three of them are meant to be ^__^

(thus, validating Inui/Yanagi, or Yanagi/Inui for me ^_^;;;)

And YES! The switching begins ^__^V

[branchandroot]

I think they would be reasonably... at ease about other liasons. I'm biased, of course. But none of them give me a particularly possessive vibe.

[soloproject.livejournal.com]

Let the corruption proceed apace.



"Are you saying," Yagyuu asked, after a long, contemplative pause, "that you're a metaphorical pyromaniac?" He looked amused.

And that is the most perfect description of Niou-mun EVER! *worships you*

"You worry too much," Masaharu grinned. "I won't ever lose myself in you, Yagyuu."

*cocks eyebrow* Oh, really?

The troika is being ADORABLE!!! And they are so babying Kirihara there...must not say it...must not say it...Ahhh! Power to the People!!! @____@ Yagyuu's kiss is so *tremble*, what great decriptions, always feel very satisfied with those *nodsphilosphically* Niou's interpretation amuses me soundly, I tend to rail like that in my PolSci class. ^_^

Whoa...I commented right-a-way. You'd think I was stalking this fic...ok, maybe I am. XDDD

[branchandroot]

I am cool with stalkers. ^_-

*giggles* Of coures, Kirihara is the baby of the team. *ducks as an irate Akaya growls at her* Oh, come on, Akaya, you know you like it when they baby you. *Akaya slouches down, muttering*

*snuggles*

damn...

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

{slack jawed and slightly breathless} well... hot damn! I wasn't expecting an ending like *that*!

[shakes head to clear it] welll... [clears throat] yes, then... errr... okay [blinks]

first off--ha! I love the image of the four boys discussing whether or not the triad's in 'that' kind of relationship, and how it would have to be all three, 'cause two alone simply don't hold it together (and aint that the truth)

And Kirihara's so cute! Think he has a crush on Yukimura? now *why* would I even *suggest* a thing like that...? Hmm... Oh, but the description of Sanada...and Yuki... and Kiri... Hmmm... now *that's* an interesting threesome idea... hmmm... what do you think, Bunny? dammit, I need to get a printer/scanner so you all could *see* the Rikkai puzzle... Kiri bent over with Yuki and Sanada behind him really *is* a nice image...

I truly love how all the characters are interacting, though (especially Bunta, who I just simply adore right now ^.^ It's a redhead thing, I swear), but, without a doubt... the ending scene definitely knocked me for a loop.

While generally, you know me, I like my scenes smutty and descriptive, this was just... well, a mind fuck, really. {grins} very well done, too. And I just can hardly wait for the sixth installment, however, with my meds beginning to wear off, I think it's about time for a nap for me... so...

Re: damn...

[branchandroot]

*huge grin* And now you know why all the descriptions of Yagyuu playing were so, erm, heated. To 'Haru-chan, playing with him and going to bed with him are almost the same thing; he does it for similar reasons.

Scanners are good. *nodnod* Poor Akaya. His massive crush on Yukimura and his growing respect for Sanada are going to tie him in huge knots very shortly.

*pets* Have a good nap.

Re: damn...

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

yeah... but! {sputters} I want more smex sooon! {whimpers}

{turns into a snickering grin} Poor Kiri, indeed... torn and tied and possibly gagged, ne? ^.^

Hmmm... I wonder what the chances of finding part 6 will be....

Re: damn...

[branchandroot]

*raises brow* The next sex will be in the middle of the angst. Are you sure?

Part six will be up in just a few, after I spellcheck it. There will likely be a hiatus after that, though, since 7 will be terrible angst, and Mom is visiting Monday and Tuesday, and I don't want to leave people hanging in depression-ville. It depends on how much I get written tomorrow. We'll see.

Re: damn...

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

if you can deal with me whining and complaining, I can deal with angst; and since this is Rikkai, we all mostly know you're gonna have to hit on Yukimura's illness and how that effects everyone, so it's not like the majority of your readers aren't waiting for *something* angsty... now, if/when you hit us with something angsty that *doesn't* meet expectations, I'll claim no responsibility, but really, when you think about it, angsty sex can be really good sex, too, and sex is sex and after finishing OZ yesterday I could *really* use someone *else's* sex, 'cause frankly, I think my brain's fried from writing that much smut in one piece at one time, so...

[blinks] 'hiatus'? huh? can't Mom, I don't know... respect the fact that you have people on the internet hanging off their chairs for your stories? (yeah, right... hn. [tries to picture her own mother's reactions to that] >.<) okay, well, have a good MOnday and Tuesday, and may Sunday be extremely productive for you, ne?

[readx0r.livejournal.com]

His goal was to get Yagyuu to cut off a teacher at the knees. He felt it would be a healthy step forward in his partner's personal development.

And it would be fun as hell to watch.

*IS JUST DEAD*

Y'know, I have not seen one episode of the anime, and I have read only one book of the manga, and already I have fallen COMPLETELY IN LOVE WITH NIOU. Not, you understand, that I think this will be some kind of huge problem. ^__________^ <333333333

[branchandroot]

All of Rikkai are huge fun, really. We really see very little of the doubles players, which, on reflection, may be why I like them so much. I was drawn in while speculating about how they got to be like that.

^___^V

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

His goal was to get Yagyuu to cut off a teacher at the knees. He felt it would be a healthy step forward in his partner's personal development.

And it would be fun as hell to watch.

The question that follows, of course, is whether he's going to succeed, and if we get to see. [grin]

"Would you really?" Yagyuu wondered, softly. His gaze was somehow both piercing and distant, and Masaharu heard questions behind the question. Would you really want to and Could you really handle it, among others.

"Oh, yes," he answered all of them, mouth curling.

[purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrs]

Yagyuu's intuition was a match for anyone else's analysis, Masaharu reflected.

Don't let Yanagi catch you saying that. [bouncebounce]

Masaharu, darling, Yagyuu *is* right. You are a an adrenaline junky.

[branchandroot]

*Way* adrenaline junky. The interesting part will be to see if they ever move beyond that.